Try my new song Electropop

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  • krazyaznkid99
    FFR Player
    • Oct 2006
    • 1

    #1

    Try my new song Electropop

    Please try my new song Electropop by Jupiter Rising.
    It was my first time making steps for a song so please i need some feedback on comments for if i did good or not. Thanks.
    Last edited by krazyaznkid99; 02-12-2008, 08:07 PM.
  • trumaestro
    I don't get no respect
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Jun 2006
    • 1332

    #2
    Re: Try my new song Electropop

    Down to it
    -Song isn't good for steps. Personally hate it, actually.
    -Too many jumps in the very beginning. Not enough emphasis on those notes to justify jumps.
    -Missed some steppable drums. (Haven't gotten past measure 8 yet...)
    -Missed some stuff in measure 7 that could've had steps.
    -Measures 14-25 have the exact same rhythm repeating. Goes back to your song selection.
    -Measures 32-75 (wtf...) have the same rhythm you used in 14-25. Still, it's your song selection, but you could've done something else here.
    -Same problem in measures 103-116 and measure 119 to the end.
    -Weird placement of jumps throughout the file
    -Sync starts out bad, and gets worse near the end of the song. This is evidence that you either had the wrong BPM to start with, or the BPM changes through the song. Also, you didn't change the Beat 0 offset. Almost every simfile would need this changed to make it on sync.
    -The only credit you get when you make a simfile is your CDTitle. It's a little picture basically with only your username and a small graphic in it. Your name does not go in the subtitle line; it's used for other things. Your name does not go in the description, either. You only get your CDTitle, which is more than enough.
    -Choose a better preview next time.
    -Graphics are always a nice addition. I recommend them, even if they take you 2 minutes to make.

    So... yeah. At least you didn't record the steps.
    Last edited by trumaestro; 02-12-2008, 08:39 PM.

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