My Song! - Cyan (demo)

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  • DarkbearX
    Shimose
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    • Feb 2006
    • 1995

    #1

    My Song! - Cyan (demo)

    DbX - Cyan (demo) <-- Short.
    DbX - Cyan <-- Full.

    Yeah, it's not finished, but I thought I'd like to hear some opinions on it.

    Any constructive criticism is nice.

    EDIT: Added the full version.
    Last edited by DarkbearX; 02-15-2008, 02:46 PM.
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  • HammyMcSquirrel
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    • Dec 2004
    • 3833

    #2
    Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

    I'm digging this one. I especially like the white noise you have going on in the background. How long are you expecting the finished product to be?

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    • DarkbearX
      Shimose
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      FFR Music Producer
      • Feb 2006
      • 1995

      #3
      Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

      Originally posted by HammyMcSquirrel
      I'm digging this one. I especially like the white noise you have going on in the background. How long are you expecting the finished product to be?
      Thanks, and I dunno. D=

      Originally posted by KgZ
      It's a good generic trance song. Not much else I can say about it.
      Hmm, yeah it's a bit straightforward. It's a demo, though, I'll see if I can add some uniqueness to it. Thanks.
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      • nubbin149
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        FFR Music Producer
        • May 2005
        • 303

        #4
        Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

        Not bad at all my good sir. I do enjoy it i'd like to hear the finished product

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        • Starshot
          /DJS\
          FFR Music Producer
          • Dec 2004
          • 1794

          #5
          Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

          The bassline needs less attack, it'll make it sound cooler and smoother.

          Try adding some reverb on that highline, it'll make things sound a hell of a lot cooler. Seriously, reverb+highpass filter=Sex for trance.

          Overall, it's not bad at all. I rather enjoyed it. You just need to make a few tweaks (trust me, there's only like, 4 you need to make) to the production qualities (reverb, EQing, etc) to make it sound fuller, then you got yourself a damn nice demo piece.

          Edit: In fact, as I listen to the tracks on your soundclick, these minor tweaks seem to be the only issue on your tracks. Congrats! It took me a year to hit this point, it's no easy feat.
          Last edited by Starshot; 02-12-2008, 09:46 PM.

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          • DarkbearX
            Shimose
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            FFR Music Producer
            • Feb 2006
            • 1995

            #6
            Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

            Originally posted by nubbin149
            Not bad at all my good sir. I do enjoy it i'd like to hear the finished product
            Thank you. It'll probably be done later on today or tomorrow.

            Originally posted by Starshot
            The bassline needs less attack, it'll make it sound cooler and smoother.

            Try adding some reverb on that highline, it'll make things sound a hell of a lot cooler. Seriously, reverb+highpass filter=Sex for trance.

            Overall, it's not bad at all. I rather enjoyed it. You just need to make a few tweaks (trust me, there's only like, 4 you need to make) to the production qualities (reverb, EQing, etc) to make it sound fuller, then you got yourself a damn nice demo piece.

            Edit: In fact, as I listen to the tracks on your soundclick, these minor tweaks seem to be the only issue on your tracks. Congrats! It took me a year to hit this point, it's no easy feat.
            Yeah, the bass is kinda loud. D=

            I suppose it could be EQ'd better. I'm gonna work on EQing and mastering on the final a lot more than I did on the demo. Thanks!
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            • DarkbearX
              Shimose
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              • Feb 2006
              • 1995

              #7
              Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

              Bump, because I don't wanna create a new thread.

              Track's finished. I guess it's not exactly what I wanted, but oh well.

              Here it is.
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              • Arcsynth
                FFR Veteran
                • Jul 2007
                • 280

                #8
                Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

                Reviewed via NG.

                ex 1h, mostly spread now when i play

                <3

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                • marioGP87
                  Shiny Zoroa :')
                  • Mar 2006
                  • 603

                  #9
                  Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

                  Loved it!
                  Originally posted by Kit
                  "Hey.. what are you doing!? get away man! I Only said it once noo, NOOOO your a bunch of Nazi's man ! get that sedative away from me! I don't like needles! I...rea..lyy.... *Faint*


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                  • DrugstoreCowboy
                    Is Famouz
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                    • Sep 2006
                    • 3409

                    #10
                    Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

                    honestly i really like it.

                    you know ive always loved your musicsssss

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                    • Problems
                      FFR Player
                      • Apr 2005
                      • 513

                      #11
                      Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo)

                      I like this a lot, and all that needs to be said has been. Keep making music, man.

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