New song to possibly submit

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  • danny53x
    AKA Yotipo
    • Jan 2007
    • 1008

    #1

    New song to possibly submit

    My friend Drew (Elaxion on FFR) said he'd be willing to make a stepfile for a new song I kind of threw together. The song is Hama no Uta, and it's on my myspace.

    What do you think of it? It seems bland to me, do you have any progression tips on how to keep a listener wanting to listen to the whole song?
  • chemicalrabbit
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2007
    • 148

    #2
    Re: New song to possibly submit

    It's repetitive and the strings sound bad. That's all. =)

    EDIT: Oh, and you look like L.
    Last edited by chemicalrabbit; 01-21-2008, 09:48 PM.
    FCs: Over 9000

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