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  • sad_clown
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2006
    • 10
    #1

    I am...

    I am sad and alone.
    I wonder if I'll ever find my true identity.
    I hear sadness filling my life.
    I want to stop hurting.
    I am sad and alone.

    I pretend to smile.
    I fell hurt.
    I touch pain.
    I worry if it will ever go away.
    I cry thinking it won't.
    I am sad and alone.

    I wnderstand nothing.
    I dream to be wanted.
    I try not to be forgotten.
    I hope I'm loved.
    I am sad and alone.
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    • Chrissi
      FFR Player
      • Mar 2004
      • 3019
      #2
      Re: I am...

      I understand that if you're sad, writing poetry to yourself can help ease the pain.

      However, this sort of poetry should not be exposed to the public, as it is quite horrible, personal, and not fun to read. It made my eyes bleed. If I had to rate it, it would be -1/10 for being cliche, uninteresting, overly emotional, and not using any sort of ...... anything really. It's not a poem. It's thoughts. Starting with "I" on every line isn't as clever as you thought it was.

      You don't go around taking pictures of your vomit and posting it on the internet, so don't post your contrived poetry.
      Last edited by Chrissi; 12-10-2007, 07:22 PM.
      C is for Charisma, it's why people think I'm great! I make my friends all laugh and smile and never want to hate!

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        • who_cares973
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2006
          • 15407
          #3
          Re: I am...

          wow chrissi...........

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            • arsonistsgetallthegirls
              FFR Player
              • Jun 2007
              • 459
              #4
              Re: I am...

              I am Legend
              Last edited by arsonistsgetallthegirls; 12-25-2007, 01:44 AM. Reason: I pee blood
              one hand, no mercy...

              [Trust me, This user is your friend.]

              Originally posted by Zeron
              Holy ****, civility in the forums?! My head just asploded.
              Wait, What?

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                • zhul4nder
                  FFR Player
                  • Jun 2006
                  • 231
                  #5
                  Re: I am...

                  i am cool too!

                  [url=http://www.narutoflow.com/character-quiz/]Take the Naruto Character

                  for brawlers: 2836-1905-4019
                  I don't know how well it'll work, but give me a add , or pm me so i can add you.

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                    • Cj_leonine
                      FFR Player
                      • Mar 2005
                      • 2070
                      #6
                      Re: I am...

                      I am

                      some-bo-dy

                      some-bo-dy

                      some-bo-dy
                      Status: Innactive Onehander

                      Best FC Before Avmiss Fix: . Be Princess . Hellbeat . End Night

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