a poem i made about paul revere.critism is appciated

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  • imajrockette
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2007
    • 36

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    a poem i made about paul revere.critism is appciated

    Posted: today at 04:42 AM
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    Looking out the window,
    I seen a man on a horse,
    He came to my house
    and knocked on my door

    He yelled the british were
    coming and the tears fell
    like rain. I knew what would
    happen next,My father would
    have to go to war

    It broke my heart to know
    that i might see him no
    more. He grabbed his gun
    and kissed us all good-bye
    and away he rode into the
    night.

    Shots were fired and men
    dropped dead, One of
    them even lost their
    head. Blood stained
    the fields and bodys
    layed still, It was a
    horrible sight and made
    me feel ill.

    My father came back after
    the war was done and i was
    happy to know that he was'nt
    gone.


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