Last Goodbye (Poem)

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  • Suicideforabheng
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2007
    • 8

    #1

    Last Goodbye (Poem)

    Last Goodbye

    Tonight please bid me your last goodbye
    For I can’t stand still here no more
    I’m cold now, so cold and alone I want to go home
    I know you’ll never come back, never again
    See my heart shattered into pieces, hear me cry in pain

    I’m tired, weak from all the hurt you put me through
    Your spoken love for me keep echoing
    Echoing, getting me insane
    Insane, yes, for so many unspoken reasons
    Reasons, your reasons you vaguely uttered

    Why believing leads one to bleeding?
    And loving so much means leaving the other in the end?
    Why trusting ends up to deceiving?
    Everything is like whirlwind in my head
    I’m going round and round in circles I
    Actually don’t understand

    We now live under separate skies
    You’re starting to live your life
    I’m struggling to hold on
    With silent tears, I let go
    Let go of everything that’s holding me back to move on

    My dreams forever will be kept
    For it is only with you I fell everything
    My tears would never fall again
    For it is only with you I could pour my self out
    Hide my self I don’t want to get hurt again

    Thank you for loving and hurting me
    I could never hate you
    For my love could see deeper beyond
    You thought the limits of my understanding
    Go now, just go and never look back
    For all you can see is still the same one
    Who made you his everything?
    Follow the road you’ve been longing to conquer
    And when you get there please….
    ….never looks back again


    My paint

    I used to smile when I told people
    that you were mine...
    but now,
    I can't even smile and say your name at the same time...
    As much as I love you,
    I have to say goodbye...
  • Tokzic
    FFR Player
    • May 2005
    • 6878

    #2
    Re: Last Goodbye (Poem)

    The poem is a hideous and cliche abomination of grammar.

    The painting is a filter spree.

    Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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    • imajrockette
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2007
      • 36

      #3
      Re: Last Goodbye (Poem)

      i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yay! finally another poet like me.its great.i hope your ont really suicidal though.oh love the paint.geard way is hawt!MCR rules.the paint was real good.your talented ^^. i can really realte to your poem and i know how you feel.well close i guess.love hurts T_T.

      wow its pretty much like how i want to explain my words in poems but yours...its comes out exellent and so much big words and its just described beautifully.totally awesome poem.


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      • Suicideforabheng
        FFR Player
        • Dec 2007
        • 8

        #4
        Re: Last Goodbye (Poem)

        tnx for the comment ill post some more ^_^

        I used to smile when I told people
        that you were mine...
        but now,
        I can't even smile and say your name at the same time...
        As much as I love you,
        I have to say goodbye...

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        • imajrockette
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2007
          • 36

          #5
          Re: Last Goodbye (Poem)

          yay! lol.you welcome and i'll check out your other poems ^^


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