Syntatic Palindrome Poems

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  • jewpinthethird
    (The Fat's Sabobah)
    FFR Music Producer
    • Nov 2002
    • 11711
    #1

    Syntatic Palindrome Poems

    Lepidoptera


    And, another poem I a made in the same style on a whim last night.

    Tea time talking: boys, and shopping,
    but what of life? There and then,
    here but when? When but here?
    Then. And there. Life of what?, but
    shopping, and boys. Talking, time, tea.

    Criticism is welcome. Also, does anyone know what these kind of poems are actually called?
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    • XpTrIpPyNeSsXd
      EHHS Sucks!
      • Mar 2005
      • 419
      #2
      Re: Syntatic Palindrome Poems

      They are still palindromes.

      PS: I like the first one, second one not so much. I can't put my finger on why, perhaps I just don't think boys and shopping go together.

      Originally posted by XXXsmittyXXX
      WEEDWEEDWEED<3333

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        • Tokzic
          FFR Player
          • May 2005
          • 6878
          #3
          Re: Syntatic Palindrome Poems

          Originally posted by XpTrIpPyNeSsXd
          They are still palindromes.
          They aren't palindromes, the letters in reverse would make a jumble.

          In any case, they're kind of cool, but they sound a little redundant because backwards they mean nearly the same thing as forwards every time.

          On second read, the tea one is awesome. Very suitable to the message, too.

          Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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            • XpTrIpPyNeSsXd
              EHHS Sucks!
              • Mar 2005
              • 419
              #4
              Re: Syntatic Palindrome Poems

              Originally posted by Tokzic
              They aren't palindromes, the letters in reverse would make a jumble.

              In any case, they're kind of cool, but they sound a little redundant because backwards they mean nearly the same thing as forwards every time.

              On second read, the tea one is awesome. Very suitable to the message, too.
              Palindromes > What are palindromes?
              http://www.fun-with-words.com/palin_explain.html

              Originally posted by XXXsmittyXXX
              WEEDWEEDWEED<3333

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                • esupin
                  FFR Player
                  • Nov 2003
                  • 1756
                  #5
                  Re: Syntatic Palindrome Poems

                  I liked the second one a lot more. I really thought that the tea -> life part was nice.

                  http://www.youtube.com/esupin

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