My Love (poem)

Before you read I just want to say one thing: I hardly ever write poems. I doubt this will affect how you critique my poem or comment on it because it's really bad, but I just feel I should say that. Maybe if I say this you won't go and inta-bash my work.

Anyway... Enjoy I guess. Comments and critiques welcome.



My love,
My darling,
Please don’t leave…

You are my heart,
My soul,
My life…

Leaving me will break my heart,
Steal away my soul,
Destroy my reason for life.

But you do leave…
And my heart is broken,
My soul stolen,
My reason for life…
Destroyed…

I scream,
I weep,
But the pain still stays…

Then I see you,
Your eyes full of sadness,
Your ability to smile gone.

I smile,
But then I see,
You truly are no more.

Your body, transparent
Your mind, sorrow filled
Your heart, forever broken

I call to you,
You do not respond.
I cry for you,
You do not comfort me.

You stand,
And watch.
Just watch,
Nothing more,
Nothing less.

I wish you to live,
But you cannot.
I wish you to speak,
But you will not.
I wish for you to laugh and smile,
But you do nothing.

I cry,
Drowning in my misery,
And then I wish for you to stay,
And you reply:
“Okay…”