My First "Good" Loop.

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  • purebloodtexan
    FFR Player
    • Oct 2006
    • 2845

    #1

    My First "Good" Loop.



    my first "good" loop, and I clearly have a long way to go.

    That's my take at the jumpstyle remix of Sonic 3 - Ice Cap Zone. It's basically the "page" following the climax point. That's most likely why it sounds rather incomplete.

    I purposely let the synth notes cross over -- it had that DJ Draconum feel to it.

    If I had any artist influences for this song, I'd probably say Jeckyll and Hyde, Patrick Jumpen, and a little bit of DJ Draconum (Newgrounds artist).

    Alright, y'all know the deal: Criticize, but keep it constructive.


  • DarkbearX
    Shimose
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Feb 2006
    • 1995

    #2
    Re: My First "Good" Loop.

    Pretty good, I like this. :P (What program do you use?)

    So you meant for the synth notes to overlap each other, hmm. It sounds mushy 'cuz they end abruptly. Add release on them instead, so that they fade out; that way, you won't have to overlap the notes (it would sound sweet, too). clap seems a bit too loud, imo, the kick should be conspicuously dominant over the clap.

    Also, I'm not feeling any low frequency in this. I'm thinking you should add a 1/8th arpeggio sine wave... just to fill the song.

    Pretty nice work. It'd make for a nice loop ;)
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    • purebloodtexan
      FFR Player
      • Oct 2006
      • 2845

      #3
      Re: My First "Good" Loop.

      This is all FL. I'm pretty familiar with the program, so reediting this should be a tedious but generally easy job.

      The only trouble I might have is decrescendos. I'll found out soon.


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      • sleeplessdragn
        ~Bang that beat Harder~
        FFR Simfile Author
        FFR Music Producer
        • Jan 2004
        • 2321

        #4
        Re: My First "Good" Loop.

        I hate the feeling of making a loop and having nowhere to go with it.

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        • purebloodtexan
          FFR Player
          • Oct 2006
          • 2845

          #5
          Re: My First "Good" Loop.

          Once I get the full version of FL for Christmas, you'll probably see a finalized version.


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