I said I was a prolific writer in my profile, so I might as well show it. It's a fanfic, so BEWARE!!!! O_O
P.S. The text in this story won't be held back, so vulgarity will occur often and some extreme stuff too (but no "N" word)
Prologue - An Original Intro
School just ended a few minutes ago at Point Loma High School, and students flooded out to go and have a well deserved weekend that Friday. Blue skies and fluffy clouds gave the Point Loma area of San Diego such a great feeling of opportunities and refreshment. The flowers that filled the community were in full bloom as spring came around. With the temperature picture perfect to top it all off, Point Loma was experiencing one of it's most beautiful days ever.
Daniel Morse just got out of his Spanish class with Mrs. Sepulveda and was ready for some fun after school. Daniel was a tall, thin, blonde sixteen year old teenager that was the happiest person you could ever meet. He was quite a nerd, but he looked like a quiet, secluded, disturbing individual with his dark appearance.
Daniel always liked going to Internet café after school on Fridays with his friends, it was the only place he felt like people would like to talk to you just to talk with you. He didn't have to deal with people harassing, insulting or teasing him while there. It was the only place where he could hang out with people his age that were mature and nice enough to care. Being the nerd that he is, Daniel decided to catch up on the book he was reading, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, which he just finished.
"Well, that was a surprise," Daniel said to himself, commenting on the ending, "at least I have a great view," he said while looking out to Downtown San Diego from an intersection that led to a close-by elementary school in the other way. It was beautiful. He felt lucky to have gotten all the way here from what he had to deal with in the past. He looked at the wonderful houses in the area, which they looked expensive and beautiful. Daniel wanted to live here when he grew up, if he could afford it.
"Man, if Danielle was here," Daniel looked at the book in his hands, "I think she would tell me to put the book away," he said. He laughed at the comment he made. He closed the book and was putting it away. "At least this day is wonderful, the only way this day could go wrong is if...," but Daniel was interrupted by someone saying, "Hey, it's the fagot, Daniel!"
"Terrance," Daniel said regrettably. He didn't like him one bit ever since he met him. Terrance always tormented Daniel and he never let up on him, even though he was a year younger that Daniel. Terrance acted like a stuck-up punk that felt like a parasite while near him. He was considerably shorter and annoying than Daniel, which made Daniel look like he should bully Terrance.
"Lay off Terrance, I've had a bad day, okay?" Daniel said, which of course was a lie. Today was one of the best days he has ever had in a long time. Terrance wasn't going to end a 2-year ritual on a whim. He knew that Daniel would never hurt anyone, just one thing on the long list of reasons to annoy Daniel. Terrance saw the book Daniel was reading and decided to use it as ammunition in his harassment.
"Only fagots read that ****," Terrance said with Josh and Herald, his buddies, laughing in the background. Terrance didn't really know the two that well; he just used them as help in his bulling.
"Well then, there are quite a number of fagots out there then under your definition," Daniel said back calmly. His anger management meetings would have to kick in right about now, or he would have to face the actually disturbed individuals again.
"Shut up!" Terrance commanded. He pushed Daniel, but he didn't knock him over. All that happened was that some of the Yu-Gi-Oh cards his little sister owned fell out of his pocket. She was into them, and Daniel spent his money on them so she could be happy.
"Stop," Daniel said to Terrance. He put his backpack down on the sidewalk and knelt down to pick up the cards on the ground. While he was picking them up, Terrance went through Daniel's backpack to see if anything good was in there to keep.
"Let's see," Terrance said, "Papers, papers, papers, a copy of Final Fantasy VII & The Legend of Dragoon," Terrance tossed the stuff he listed off, the CD cases breaking open on the pavement. When Daniel looked back to see why Terrance was naming that stuff,1 only to see his stuff tossed around all over the place.
"Terrance!" Daniel yelled, but Terrance kept on going, "A stuffed animal," he said as he threw the stuffed animal onto the pavement behind him. "Belle!" Daniel yelled as he went to go pick up the stuffed animal. Terrance kept on going, "A Naruto headband? You must have no life," and he tossed the headband behind him, landing on a rosebush.
"That's for Danielle." Daniel said as he went to go pick the headband up. The thorns did hurt a little, but it was a present, so it didn't matter.
"What the hell is this?" Terrance said, throwing a tiny, blue stuffed animal behind him.
"That's a plushie of Sonic the Hedgehog I got for my little sister." Daniel said, fury burning in him. He went over to pick it up, only for Terrance to get his attention again. "A GBA? You have got to be kidding me!" Terrance said, holding the GBA he got out of Daniel's backpack. He threw it on the sidewalk as he was unimpressed by Daniel's possessions. Daniel watched the GBA shatter on the ground into tiny little shards of plastic and glass.
"You bastard, that was the only Christmas present my little sister and I got," Daniel said. He took out the brass knuckles one of his friends gave him that day for protection. He would never have thought that they would come to use that day, let alone ever. Daniel was quite the pacifist, so all he wanted to accomplish was to frighten Terrance. "Go away," Daniel said demonically.
"Make me, you ***," Terrance signaled his cronies, "Come on guys, let's get him," Terrance commanded. So he, Josh & Herald ran up to Daniel to attack him. Daniel realized that the element of intimidation failed, although he didn't know why he had to sound so psychotically (must be an actor thing, Daniel thought). Quickly, Daniel got up, turned around and ran away from the three as fast as he could, but he wasn't fast enough. When Terrance, Josh & Herald slammed into Daniel, the worst happened. Daniel fell down and rolled down the hill on the street looking out to San Diego. Daniel kept rolling down the hill until the street leveled out at an intersection half way down. Daniel slowly got up as his pain tried to cripple him, but he wasn't going to stand for this. As he finally got onto his feet, a car driving out of control came down the hill. It hit Daniel dead on before he could do anything about it, making him go into the air a few feet off of the hill. Daniel screamed, waiting for judgment to occur as he was falling. Then, before he landed onto the street at the bottom of the hill, everything had stopped. The traffic below, the clouds above, the wind, everything had stopped.
Daniel had vanished.
P.S. The text in this story won't be held back, so vulgarity will occur often and some extreme stuff too (but no "N" word)
Prologue - An Original Intro
School just ended a few minutes ago at Point Loma High School, and students flooded out to go and have a well deserved weekend that Friday. Blue skies and fluffy clouds gave the Point Loma area of San Diego such a great feeling of opportunities and refreshment. The flowers that filled the community were in full bloom as spring came around. With the temperature picture perfect to top it all off, Point Loma was experiencing one of it's most beautiful days ever.
Daniel Morse just got out of his Spanish class with Mrs. Sepulveda and was ready for some fun after school. Daniel was a tall, thin, blonde sixteen year old teenager that was the happiest person you could ever meet. He was quite a nerd, but he looked like a quiet, secluded, disturbing individual with his dark appearance.
Daniel always liked going to Internet café after school on Fridays with his friends, it was the only place he felt like people would like to talk to you just to talk with you. He didn't have to deal with people harassing, insulting or teasing him while there. It was the only place where he could hang out with people his age that were mature and nice enough to care. Being the nerd that he is, Daniel decided to catch up on the book he was reading, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, which he just finished.
"Well, that was a surprise," Daniel said to himself, commenting on the ending, "at least I have a great view," he said while looking out to Downtown San Diego from an intersection that led to a close-by elementary school in the other way. It was beautiful. He felt lucky to have gotten all the way here from what he had to deal with in the past. He looked at the wonderful houses in the area, which they looked expensive and beautiful. Daniel wanted to live here when he grew up, if he could afford it.
"Man, if Danielle was here," Daniel looked at the book in his hands, "I think she would tell me to put the book away," he said. He laughed at the comment he made. He closed the book and was putting it away. "At least this day is wonderful, the only way this day could go wrong is if...," but Daniel was interrupted by someone saying, "Hey, it's the fagot, Daniel!"
"Terrance," Daniel said regrettably. He didn't like him one bit ever since he met him. Terrance always tormented Daniel and he never let up on him, even though he was a year younger that Daniel. Terrance acted like a stuck-up punk that felt like a parasite while near him. He was considerably shorter and annoying than Daniel, which made Daniel look like he should bully Terrance.
"Lay off Terrance, I've had a bad day, okay?" Daniel said, which of course was a lie. Today was one of the best days he has ever had in a long time. Terrance wasn't going to end a 2-year ritual on a whim. He knew that Daniel would never hurt anyone, just one thing on the long list of reasons to annoy Daniel. Terrance saw the book Daniel was reading and decided to use it as ammunition in his harassment.
"Only fagots read that ****," Terrance said with Josh and Herald, his buddies, laughing in the background. Terrance didn't really know the two that well; he just used them as help in his bulling.
"Well then, there are quite a number of fagots out there then under your definition," Daniel said back calmly. His anger management meetings would have to kick in right about now, or he would have to face the actually disturbed individuals again.
"Shut up!" Terrance commanded. He pushed Daniel, but he didn't knock him over. All that happened was that some of the Yu-Gi-Oh cards his little sister owned fell out of his pocket. She was into them, and Daniel spent his money on them so she could be happy.
"Stop," Daniel said to Terrance. He put his backpack down on the sidewalk and knelt down to pick up the cards on the ground. While he was picking them up, Terrance went through Daniel's backpack to see if anything good was in there to keep.
"Let's see," Terrance said, "Papers, papers, papers, a copy of Final Fantasy VII & The Legend of Dragoon," Terrance tossed the stuff he listed off, the CD cases breaking open on the pavement. When Daniel looked back to see why Terrance was naming that stuff,1 only to see his stuff tossed around all over the place.
"Terrance!" Daniel yelled, but Terrance kept on going, "A stuffed animal," he said as he threw the stuffed animal onto the pavement behind him. "Belle!" Daniel yelled as he went to go pick up the stuffed animal. Terrance kept on going, "A Naruto headband? You must have no life," and he tossed the headband behind him, landing on a rosebush.
"That's for Danielle." Daniel said as he went to go pick the headband up. The thorns did hurt a little, but it was a present, so it didn't matter.
"What the hell is this?" Terrance said, throwing a tiny, blue stuffed animal behind him.
"That's a plushie of Sonic the Hedgehog I got for my little sister." Daniel said, fury burning in him. He went over to pick it up, only for Terrance to get his attention again. "A GBA? You have got to be kidding me!" Terrance said, holding the GBA he got out of Daniel's backpack. He threw it on the sidewalk as he was unimpressed by Daniel's possessions. Daniel watched the GBA shatter on the ground into tiny little shards of plastic and glass.
"You bastard, that was the only Christmas present my little sister and I got," Daniel said. He took out the brass knuckles one of his friends gave him that day for protection. He would never have thought that they would come to use that day, let alone ever. Daniel was quite the pacifist, so all he wanted to accomplish was to frighten Terrance. "Go away," Daniel said demonically.
"Make me, you ***," Terrance signaled his cronies, "Come on guys, let's get him," Terrance commanded. So he, Josh & Herald ran up to Daniel to attack him. Daniel realized that the element of intimidation failed, although he didn't know why he had to sound so psychotically (must be an actor thing, Daniel thought). Quickly, Daniel got up, turned around and ran away from the three as fast as he could, but he wasn't fast enough. When Terrance, Josh & Herald slammed into Daniel, the worst happened. Daniel fell down and rolled down the hill on the street looking out to San Diego. Daniel kept rolling down the hill until the street leveled out at an intersection half way down. Daniel slowly got up as his pain tried to cripple him, but he wasn't going to stand for this. As he finally got onto his feet, a car driving out of control came down the hill. It hit Daniel dead on before he could do anything about it, making him go into the air a few feet off of the hill. Daniel screamed, waiting for judgment to occur as he was falling. Then, before he landed onto the street at the bottom of the hill, everything had stopped. The traffic below, the clouds above, the wind, everything had stopped.
Daniel had vanished.
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