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Last edited by Flyleef; 10-19-2007, 04:11 PM.No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. -
Re: like my beat??
Are double-posts bad?No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. -
Re: like my beat??
You are well aware that you shouldn't double-post.
The song was alright, sounded a little tinny, but it was rather (read - overly) repetitive. For the last 3 minutes or so it barely changed at all.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
Thanks.
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
I found it pretty good, repetitive, but I really enjoyed listening to it.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
Thanks again! By the way, my friend is going to rap on it.
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
Ah...ok.
That might sound a bit better. I thought you were going for something like a standalone trance beat. In that case the repetition is less of an issue.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
I said that it was a beat, not a song, yo. Of course if it's a beat, some vocals will be added on it, right?
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
its a nice beat for rapping.
i've heard your other stuff.
you've gotten much better.signatures are for nerds
nerdsComment
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Re: like my beat??
It's not bad. Not quite extraordinary, but I have no real complaints about it. Consistency is a blessing in rap.
Also, dude, yo, yo, I'm a gangster.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
Thanks, jecht.
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: like my beat??
its a good beat manComment
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Re: like my beat??
thank you. I'll post up the final product w/ rapping soon.
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
like my beat??
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