Here's a song I wrote, there's no numeric pattern, but I tried to make rhymes... It's about Atlantis, as you can see, originally written for my power metal band, but I figured it was too cheesy and none of the songs fitted the mood anyways. Here it is:
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Standing in the shadows of the past
You shimmer in my memories
A glance at the yet gone so fast
A souvenir of the tragedies
Like a glitch in the flow of time
My glory, fame and renown
A flash at the once sublime
What had fallen.. was my crown
--refrain---
Atlantis, sunken city
In the depths of the sea
Forever lost in the dark
Nothing left but it's mark
---end refrain---
My pride for you I expressed
From these scaffolds of stone
Upon which my empire laid rest
Under the orders of the throne
But in a single day and night
My whole future and past
Was vanished out of sight
My people laid aghast
Not to be found ever again
I laid at the bottom of the ocean
No option of bargain
There, a forgotten nation
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Any comments, suggestions?
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Standing in the shadows of the past
You shimmer in my memories
A glance at the yet gone so fast
A souvenir of the tragedies
Like a glitch in the flow of time
My glory, fame and renown
A flash at the once sublime
What had fallen.. was my crown
--refrain---
Atlantis, sunken city
In the depths of the sea
Forever lost in the dark
Nothing left but it's mark
---end refrain---
My pride for you I expressed
From these scaffolds of stone
Upon which my empire laid rest
Under the orders of the throne
But in a single day and night
My whole future and past
Was vanished out of sight
My people laid aghast
Not to be found ever again
I laid at the bottom of the ocean
No option of bargain
There, a forgotten nation
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Any comments, suggestions?