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  • LeafNinja
    FFR Player
    • May 2006
    • 32

    #1

    Thesis

    How do I wirte a good 5 - Paragraph Essay Thesis?

    I have to write a thesis about one character from either:

    "The Most Dangerous Game",

    "The Necklace",

    "The Open Window",

    "Lather and Nothing Else",

    "The Sniper"

    by 9/19
  • rade0110
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2004
    • 1253

    #2
    Re: Thesis

    Introductory Paragraph
    Three Main Body Paragraphs
    Conclusion Paragraph
    Originally posted by Synthlight
    Everyone uses quotes from Synthlight in their signature. So I'm making this one up to fit in.

    Cheers,

    Synthlight

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    • beaner692
      FFR Player
      • Oct 2006
      • 1071

      #3
      Re: Thesis

      5 Paragraphs, 8 sentences+ each

      I would do "The Most Dangerous Game" Teachers seem to love that.


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      • LeafNinja
        FFR Player
        • May 2006
        • 32

        #4
        Re: Thesis

        Can you type a good 1 sentence thesis for me about the "Most Dangerous Game" then?

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        • devonin
          Very Grave Indeed
          Event Staff
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Apr 2004
          • 10120

          #5
          Re: Thesis

          Tell them what you're going to tell them.
          Tell them.
          Tell them what you told them.

          That's the proper format for a 5-paragraph essay in most levels of education that assign something that short.

          As for a thesis. Read the book, develop your own? We can help with content and style, but I don't think anybody ought to be writing the thing for you.

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          • LeafNinja
            FFR Player
            • May 2006
            • 32

            #6
            Re: Thesis

            Does this sound good:

            The Republican Sniper is intelligent because he uses diversions, knows when to fall back, and knows hot to get the best of what he has.

            or:

            I think Rainsford is intelligent because he knows how to make traps/diversions, follows his instincts, and uses past knowledge to help him.

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            • devonin
              Very Grave Indeed
              Event Staff
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Apr 2004
              • 10120

              #7
              Re: Thesis

              The general form of an introductory paragraph for a 5-paragraph essay on this topic looks something like this:

              In the book [Name of book], [name of Author] uses the character of [Name of Character] to [Purpose of the Character in the Book]. They do this in three main ways, [Way 1], [Way 2], and [Way 3]. This paper will discuss [The Ways collectively] and [Point of your argument]

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              • ShastaTwist
                FFR Veteran
                • Sep 2004
                • 599

                #8
                Re: Thesis

                NEVER PUT YOUR OPINION IN A PAPER!

                Oh my Jesus.

                This includes, "I think," "I believe," "My opinion is," and basically anything else with "I" or "my" unless it is an opinion paper. Rather, state your opinion as if it were fact.

                "Rainsford IS intelligent because etc."
                Last edited by ShastaTwist; 09-18-2007, 04:22 PM.

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                • devonin
                  Very Grave Indeed
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                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Apr 2004
                  • 10120

                  #9
                  Re: Thesis

                  Yeesh, I just went and read that short story...they certainly do mean short when they say that.

                  I'd much rather write some paper about the extent to which the character of General Zaroff inspired the later character of Kraven the Hunter, or something about how being put into life or death situations can make people act in ways that beforehand they would have vehemantly denied they were capable...there's really not much to write about in that story.

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                  • ShastaTwist
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Sep 2004
                    • 599

                    #10
                    Re: Thesis

                    You could always write about how Rainsford becomes a murderer and why.

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                    • Tokzic
                      FFR Player
                      • May 2005
                      • 6878

                      #11
                      Re: Thesis

                      One of the first rules about making a thesis is it has to be something someone can argue against.

                      "[Character] is smart" isn't something that can be argued very efficiently.

                      Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                      • LeafNinja
                        FFR Player
                        • May 2006
                        • 32

                        #12
                        Re: Thesis

                        Oh well, I am only a fresh man in high school.

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