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  • Cyanite
    SIT THE **** DOWN.
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2007
    • 1174
    #1

    The Purest Element

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    Third song

    C&C appreciated, personally I really like how it's got a much fuller sound to it than my other two songs, and is much more melodically driven. I'm also aware that the two halves of the song are extremely different from each other, which was a result of me starting the song in one mindset and finishing it in another.


    Originally posted by KgZ
    oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth
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    • OMGfat123
      FFR Player
      • Jan 2007
      • 208
      #2
      Re: The Purest Element

      It's nice when the piano comes in. Great song Cyanite!


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        • Zageron
          Zageron E. Tazaterra
          FFR Administrator
          • Apr 2007
          • 6592
          #3
          Re: The Purest Element

          I like the beginning. o.o

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            • Gorlock
              {Underground Concept}
              FFR Music Producer
              • Feb 2005
              • 98
              #4
              Re: The Purest Element

              this is a good track except for the difference in the first and second halves. i understand that you had different mindsets, but you might consider just making 2 separate tracks on this one...

              both times when the drums break away (about 1:00 and 2:15) i noticed that they seem to stumble over themselves. perhaps consider fading them out with a different method than using a drum rhythm that wasn't present anywhere else in the track.

              i did like the piano in the 2nd half. it seemed to add a pleasant sound to the track. and you're right, it has a full sound to it. not heavy on the low end and not dominating on the high end.

              you're talented.
              keep it up.

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                • blindreper1179
                  Vice President Of TGB
                  • Jun 2006
                  • 5900
                  #5
                  Re: The Purest Element

                  i have nothing to complain about. i listened to it a couple times, because of getting side tracked. and nothing caught my attention of being misplaced.

                  9/10
                  Originally posted by thesunfan
                  absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
                  Originally posted by choof
                  It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
                  Originally posted by choof
                  whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
                  Originally posted by Celirra
                  I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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                    • zajac
                      aka uAnimals
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Aug 2003
                      • 4050
                      #6
                      Re: The Purest Element

                      Originally posted by Gorlock
                      this is a good track except for the difference in the first and second halves. i understand that you had different mindsets, but you might consider just making 2 separate tracks on this one...

                      both times when the drums break away (about 1:00 and 2:15) i noticed that they seem to stumble over themselves. perhaps consider fading them out with a different method than using a drum rhythm that wasn't present anywhere else in the track.

                      i did like the piano in the 2nd half. it seemed to add a pleasant sound to the track. and you're right, it has a full sound to it. not heavy on the low end and not dominating on the high end.

                      you're talented.
                      keep it up.
                      I completely agree with my BFF 4 lyfe.
                      Last edited by zajac; 09-12-2007, 06:36 PM.
                      Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
                      We Rate You: Cool Motherfucer. 9/10

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                        • Cyanite
                          SIT THE **** DOWN.
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Feb 2007
                          • 1174
                          #7
                          Re: The Purest Element

                          thanks for the comments, espcecially your's Gorlock.


                          Originally posted by KgZ
                          oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                            • Gorlock
                              {Underground Concept}
                              FFR Music Producer
                              • Feb 2005
                              • 98
                              #8
                              Re: The Purest Element

                              yeah Cyanite, no problem. i'm always gonna give an honest opinion. i don't feel like sugar-coating a response just so you like me. :P

                              i'm all about the music.

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