I made the beat and my friend Steven A.K.A. Creepy Fingers wrote the lyrics/rapped:
Please tell me what you guys think!
Please tell me what you guys think!
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Last edited by Flyleef; 08-8-2007, 12:10 PM.No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. -
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its alright i guess
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Wow, you listened to it in 2 minutes! Listen to the whole song, dude!No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming
pretty good =D"The Communist vision is the vision of man without God"
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I got very bored at the 1:36 mark...there's no way I'm beating getting past that mark.Comment
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"Gimme Head" is an awesome track. It's unfortunate that none of this can go on FFR. Considering you are 14, this is pretty damn amazing. You have to appreciate this guy's flow at his age. The music production quality is holding you back.
Cheers,
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Thanks everyone! Songs like this don't go on FFR..? What if I make a song with no cursing?Last edited by Flyleef; 08-8-2007, 12:05 PM.No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming
I liked it. I liked some of the other tracks better than the one you posted though. If you keep it up you could have a future.
Keep it up.
And this made me lmao.
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nice, put that into FFR# of AAA: 82
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If gimme head was about something else and the language was toned down. I would do my best to push you into the FFR hip-hop section as a new artist. http://www.myspace/creepyfingers <-- your myspace?
I know these rules suck and I love the song the way it is but we unfortunately have set certain rules that we must adhere to.. Think of FFR like FM Radio rules.
Again, don't get me wrong.. I hate telling an artist to change anything.
Cheers,
SynthlightLast edited by Synthlight; 08-8-2007, 12:22 PM.Comment
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No, I think you guys forgot to read that my friend is rapping and I made the beat. That's my friends Myspace.If gimme head was about something else and the language was toned down. I would do my best to push you into the FFR hip-hop section as a new artist. http://www.myspace/creepyfingers <-- your myspace?
I know these rules suck and I love the song the way it is but we unfortunately have set certain rules that we must adhere to.. Think of FFR like FM Radio rules.
Again, don't get me wrong.. I hate telling an artist to change anything.
Cheers,
SynthlightNo matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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it was pretty tiight
i like the beat to it
although the "see ya later.... alligator" made me stop the song XD
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No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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