Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

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  • jimcwx
    FFR Player
    • May 2005
    • 5
    #1

    Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

    I close my eyes.
    Amongst the Darkness
    I walk.
    Searching,
    through the tight gaps of the corridor,
    Stepping in front of the never ending cliff of oblivion,
    there is scream from the soul.
    Hundreds, thousands, millions of strings.
    The mindless desires of the body,
    attaches themselves to every essence of the soul.
    Tightly, Slowly, Painfully,
    pulling closer,
    and closer.
    There are no alternatives, there can be no escape.

    I open my eyes,
    and everything disappears.
    Or does it?
    It’s still here, there
    and everywhere.
    Darkness, is still Darkness.

    Shackled in between for all eternity.


    Sometimes I wonder
    can the never detachable strings ever pull me towards the light?
    If you have any comments, feedback, or constructive criticism on whatever I may say, please feel free to jam them back to whichever nerve in your brain it may have sprouted from. Because if you fail to do so I will simply ignore you.
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    • Tibs
      FFR Player
      • May 2006
      • 5235
      #2
      Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

      CRAAAAAAAAAAAAWLING IIIIIIIIN MY SKIIIIIIIIIIIN

      Metal covers of vidya game songs

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        • jimcwx
          FFR Player
          • May 2005
          • 5
          #3
          Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

          oh ya.. forgot to give it a title.... i'll call it...

          Stupid Stuff
          If you have any comments, feedback, or constructive criticism on whatever I may say, please feel free to jam them back to whichever nerve in your brain it may have sprouted from. Because if you fail to do so I will simply ignore you.

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            • ToxicShadow
              FFR Player
              • Jun 2003
              • 107
              #4
              Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

              why do all the people who live within fifteen minutes of me write retarded poems

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                • ShastaTwist
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Sep 2004
                  • 599
                  #5
                  Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                  These wounds, they will not heal.

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                    • alainbryden
                      Seen your member
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Dec 2003
                      • 2873
                      #6
                      Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                      Originally posted by jimcwx
                      can the never detachable strings ever pull me towards the light?
                      Oprah was talking about that last week.

                      The answer is no.
                      ~NEIGH

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                        • Soujiro_The_Tenkan
                          FFR Player
                          • May 2007
                          • 8
                          #7
                          Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                          Beyond recognition this self sabatoge has a reason triggered by others around i keep on getting dragged down. Beyond the pit of sorrow these perals i keep fighting until the dawn of the light washes away all my frieght. To the morning sun i weep when through the night i stab and scream. Wake me from this moonlight curse before i lay inside a hearse. Before i fall back down this pit please let me breathe once more before i fall into nevers lore.
                          Ted Spartz 7/23/07

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                            • alster1
                              What is this I don't even
                              • Sep 2006
                              • 948
                              #8
                              Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                              feeeeeeear is hoooooow i fall!!!!!

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                                • ShastaTwist
                                  FFR Veteran
                                  • Sep 2004
                                  • 599
                                  #9
                                  Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                                  Confusing...

                                  Confusing what is real.

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                                    • Mental Mage
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Jul 2007
                                      • 111
                                      #10
                                      Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                                      For ye who quote Linkin Park: POST WHORES :P K im better :P

                                      To the author of the first poem. I liked it alot Emo; but most good poetry anymore is :P Although it didn't seem to have any set pattern or beat. But kudos none the less .
                                      When in danger or in doubt; run in circles scream and shout

                                      "Do you want a bomb mental?" - Synthlight

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                                        • phe0nixblade
                                          Praise the sun mofo
                                          • Sep 2005
                                          • 4281
                                          #11
                                          Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                                          Originally posted by Mental Mage
                                          For ye who quote Linkin Park: POST WHORES :P K im better :P

                                          To the author of the first poem. I liked it alot Emo; but most good poetry anymore is :P Although it didn't seem to have any set pattern or beat. But kudos none the less .
                                          Jesus christ ****ing bump?

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                                            • Mental Mage
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Jul 2007
                                              • 111
                                              #12
                                              Re: Umm.. i got bored of clickin arrows so... i wrote a random poem

                                              This is what happens when ur bored and are searching through the stuff time has forgot :P. But I did like the poem
                                              When in danger or in doubt; run in circles scream and shout

                                              "Do you want a bomb mental?" - Synthlight

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