Want feedback on a song I made

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  • unkdavar
    Bombermen United
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Oct 2006
    • 302

    #1

    Want feedback on a song I made

    A while ago I made a thread of my first song. I think I improved a little now and wanted to get feedback on another song I made.

    This is the link to the song.
    Last edited by unkdavar; 05-20-2007, 07:09 PM.
  • Nick_S_199
    FFR Player
    • Nov 2006
    • 225

    #2
    Re: Want feedback on a song I made

    Ummm.. Not bad. Its a litlle... I unno how to say it, Choppy? I don't like that plucked-like instrument you use that much. There needed to be a bit more change up, like, its a bit too repetitive.

    Its a very good song if your just starting out though, because I know how hard it can be to start off (mainly because i'm just ecperimenting with FL Studio myself!).

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    • MRTL_mrclean17
      FFR Player
      • Nov 2006
      • 156

      #3
      Re: Want feedback on a song I made

      Sounds like you used midi, use something else, midi is only good for making ringtones. However this song would definitely be a kickass ringtone.

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      • unkdavar
        Bombermen United
        FFR Simfile Author
        • Oct 2006
        • 302

        #4
        Re: Want feedback on a song I made

        I didn't use midi. I used this one sound which I like because it is fast so the notes won't get overlapped from the speed. I agree that the sound is choppy. I changed it to a better sound and will reupload it.

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        • MRTL_mrclean17
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2006
          • 156

          #5
          Re: Want feedback on a song I made

          You don't necessarily have to change the synthline itself, just add a little reverb or some other effect.

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          • Nick_S_199
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2006
            • 225

            #6
            Re: Want feedback on a song I made

            Yea, Just make it a bit less-plucky.

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