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  • unkdavar
    Bombermen United
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Oct 2006
    • 302
    #1

    My first song

    I need feedback on my first song. I can't make it too long since I am just using the demo of FL.
    http://www.esnips.com/doc/5a9a0a30-8f27-4b58-b665-d5627a216b78/Tombstone
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    • wickedawesomeful
      Carls, Girls, & Drugs
      FFR Music Producer
      • Dec 2006
      • 3888
      #2
      Re: My first song

      Oh my gosh too much drum usage. At least make them quieter, they overpower the whole song. They're clipping like a mofo. Also, you need more than random little riffs and overpowering drums for a song. Put some MELODY in there. The whole thing dosen't seem to fit together very well. I guess this is better than the average first song though. Keep it up and you'll get better.
      http://dozemusic.com/

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        • unkdavar
          Bombermen United
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Oct 2006
          • 302
          #3
          Re: My first song

          Ok.

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            • u84
              FFR Veteran
              • Jul 2006
              • 1921
              #4
              Re: My first song

              Hmm.. I like it. Reminds me of Hellbeat and seems like it would definitely be a hard song if someone like Shash stepped it. Nice first song.
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                • unkdavar
                  Bombermen United
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Oct 2006
                  • 302
                  #5
                  Re: My first song

                  Thank you.

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                    • midnghtraver
                      Icarus Moth
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Jan 2006
                      • 2064
                      #6
                      Re: My first song

                      I couldn't get it working for me?

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                        • unkdavar
                          Bombermen United
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Oct 2006
                          • 302
                          #7
                          Re: My first song

                          Explain? The Page or the song.

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                            • timd1260
                              FFR Player
                              • Jan 2007
                              • 183
                              #8
                              Re: My first song

                              this is an interesting concept, the tombstone thing and all. ya, check your levels, real important and can ruin a song, also real easy to fix. keep creating, youl get the hang of all of it. you defintitly have potential. well done

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                                • unkdavar
                                  Bombermen United
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  • Oct 2006
                                  • 302
                                  #9
                                  Re: My first song

                                  Ok.

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                                    • Nick_S_199
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Nov 2006
                                      • 225
                                      #10
                                      Re: My first song

                                      Drum Line is good, tune it down a bit, and the bells are sort of stupid. Needs moar melody, and CLIPPING is HORRIBLE.

                                      Edit: 2 day bump hehe

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                                        • Starshot
                                          /DJS\
                                          FFR Music Producer
                                          • Dec 2004
                                          • 1794
                                          #11
                                          Re: My first song

                                          Originally posted by wickedawesomeful
                                          They're clipping like a mofo.
                                          I swear to ****ing god, if I hear you saying **** about clipping one more time, I'm going to scream.

                                          Clipping is not bad, people. If it contributes to the overall sound in a way that's positive, then it's fine. Negative, that's a whole 'nother story. Clipping can be very, very effective in glitch and dutch hardcore.

                                          However, in this case, it doesn't help the song. So, use the soft clipper to balance it out and make it seem more even with the rest of the song.

                                          I've said it once and I'll say it again, electronic composing is 50% melody/notes, and 50% is mastering. You have the first 50% down. But, don't worry, my friend; That will come in time. It's all about how it sounds, not how it looks in your damn level window. Isn't that right, Wicked?
                                          Last edited by Starshot; 04-29-2007, 06:18 PM.

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                                            • wickedawesomeful
                                              Carls, Girls, & Drugs
                                              FFR Music Producer
                                              • Dec 2006
                                              • 3888
                                              #12
                                              Re: My first song

                                              Originally posted by Starshot
                                              I swear to ****ing god, if I hear you saying **** about clipping one more time, I'm going to scream.

                                              Clipping is not bad, people. If it contributes to the overall sound in a way that's positive, then it's fine. Negative, that's a whole 'nother story. Clipping can be very, very effective in glitch and dutch hardcore.

                                              However, in this case, it doesn't help the song. So, use the soft clipper to balance it out and make it seem more even with the rest of the song.

                                              I've said it once and I'll say it again, electronic composing is 50% melody/notes, and 50% is mastering. You have the first 50% down. But, don't worry, my friend; That will come in time. It's all about how it sounds, not how it looks in your damn level window.
                                              I swear to ****ing god, if I hear you saying **** about dutch hardcore one more time, I'm going to scream.
                                              http://dozemusic.com/

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                                                • Starshot
                                                  /DJS\
                                                  FFR Music Producer
                                                  • Dec 2004
                                                  • 1794
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: My first song

                                                  Originally posted by wickedawesomeful
                                                  I swear to ****ing god, if I hear you saying **** about dutch hardcore one more time, I'm going to scream.
                                                  I only use it because it's a genre that comes to mind where clipping is actually useful in sound quality.

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                                                    • wickedawesomeful
                                                      Carls, Girls, & Drugs
                                                      FFR Music Producer
                                                      • Dec 2006
                                                      • 3888
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: My first song

                                                      Originally posted by Starshot
                                                      I only use it because it's a genre that comes to mind where clipping is actually useful in sound quality.
                                                      I know. I was being sarcastic. Seriously though, I've heard you talk about dutch hardcore like five times in the last two days.

                                                      As for clipping to help the music, I can see your point. I agree, it somewhat does help the song here. The problem is there is simply TOO MUCH of it.
                                                      http://dozemusic.com/

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