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    AngelThing
    • Nov 2006
    • 401
    #1

    I need advice.

    Okay, first, I don't know if this is the place to post this...but if it isn't can a mod please move it to it's proper place?

    Alright, well I made a song using Fruity Loops, and it's my first "completed" song, I just want some advice on how to better myself, because it's not all that great of a song. Here's the link to the song:

    Page not found – My File Hut
    http://www.myfilehut.com/userfiles/138006/imagination.mp3


    Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. :]
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      AngelThing
      • Nov 2006
      • 401
      #2
      Re: I need advice.

      Sorry for the double post, but my internet is going slow so the edit page isn't loading.

      But it's 3:09, and the middle is a little repetitive..

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        • Wlfwnd91
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2006
          • 499
          #3
          Re: I need advice.

          Hmm...I like it. I think the bumps (Can't remember the name of that sound) and the claps are a bit out of rhythm, and it got somewhat annoying, but you have a nice base sound set up and I like how you finish the song out.


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              AngelThing
              • Nov 2006
              • 401
              #4
              Re: I need advice.

              (Late response)

              Yeah, they are claps, and I think that it's because of all the bassdrive.com I was listening to, a lot of the times the drum loop has nothing to do with the main rhythm, so I just kind of threw it together like that. I should have worked on it more, but since I only have the demo version of FL Studio, I can't go back and edit it, I'll hopefully buy it soon because I'm kind of sick of leaving it on my computer all the time so that I can edit and tweak it later.
              Thanks, though. :]

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