ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

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  • hoochan
    woah shrooms
    • Nov 2005
    • 3838
    #1

    ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

    “The Hobbit”

    In a hole there lived a Hobbit.
    The dwarves seized him
    From his comfortable home
    And they went
    On an adventure.
    They rode on ponies
    Toward a destination
    Of great peril
    And they knew
    That they might not come back.
    And in the way,
    He got into trouble.
    They met trolls, goblins,
    Wargs, Eagles,
    Humans, elves,
    And even a skin changing bear.
    They got to their point of interest
    And faced a fierce dragon.
    Bard slain the dragon
    With a single arrow
    With the help from a raven.
    Then the people of the land
    Wanted to steal the treasure.
    A blood-gulched war had sparked.
    They luckily won the war
    And peace was again restored.

    Any suggestions or edits or comments would be nice.
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    • lord_carbo
      FFR Player
      • Dec 2004
      • 6222
      #2
      Re: ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

      Didn't read, but there's a forum for this stuff, 'ya know:

      Writing and Literature - Flash Flash Revolution
      http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/forumdisplay.php?f=52


      Surprisingly, people do post there.
      last.fm

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        • Illysium
          FFR Player
          • Dec 2006
          • 38
          #3
          Re: ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

          <3 'Tis good hoochan, fav part "Bard slain the dragon", made me laugh. A puffy bard singing and then killing a dragon.

          ".. Leave it be .."
          If you have attempted Alchemy by clapping your hands or by drawing an array, copy and paste this in your signature.

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            • sebra
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2003
              • 238
              #4
              Re: ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

              it's okay. try not to use internet acronyms when theyre not needed
              Originally posted by spaceballs
              talk about roller coatser tycoon,2 and 3 and other games like thrillville this is the thread for the thrill seekers

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                • hoochan
                  woah shrooms
                  • Nov 2005
                  • 3838
                  #5
                  Re: ROFL Check out my poem for the Hobbit XD

                  Originally posted by sebra
                  it's okay. try not to use internet acronyms when theyre not needed
                  What?

                  Originally posted by Illysium
                  <3 'Tis good hoochan, fav part "Bard slain the dragon", made me laugh. A puffy bard singing and then killing a dragon.
                  Lol thanks

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