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  • drake_legendz
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2004
    • 139

    #1

    To pay homage

    Well since all this got in general was a massive amount of spam threads over lapping it I decided to post something I wrote while sitting on my computer in here where intelligent people reside and can actually understand it.

    To pay homage and our respects to those lost and those who will not return, the men and women who have faught bravely against opression and terrorism
    and stared death and fear in it's face and did their duty to their country, their nation, their family, theirselves and most of all, the human race.
    Those who are gone should not be forgotten for they have paved the way that we should follow.
    Let not a voice of opression, terrorism and greed taint us. let us follow the example of the men and women in the service of our species.
    For they cannot be effected by such things anymore,for they have done their fellow soldiers and familys well and have moved on to a place where such things do not exist.
    To those forgotten let us raise our heads and be proud.
    Hey emo kid can I give u a suggestion.
    Try new johnsons baby shampoo

    NO MORE TEARS!

    How many emo kids does it take to screw in a lightbulb?

    NONE they all sit in the dark crying
  • GuidoHunter
    is against custom titles
    • Oct 2003
    • 7371

    #2
    Re: To pay homage



    --Guido


    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    She has an asshole, in other pics you can see a diaper taped to her dead twin's back.
    Sentences I thought I never would have to type.

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    • TheRapingDragon
      A car crash mind
      • Aug 2005
      • 9788

      #3
      Re: To pay homage

      You sure are intent on posting this everywhere, aren't you. This is the third time I have seen this thread by you.

      Seeing as how this is the literature thread, I'll look at it in that respect.

      You can't spell, you don't know grammar (of which Guido has already pointed out), and you sure don't know how to write emotionally.

      If that piece is supposed to "stir emotions" in people then it isn't doing a very good job. It seems rushed, cliche, and it doesn't even go anywhere.

      This is something you expect an American pre-teen to write when asked what George Bush would say to the world after 9/11.

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      • drake_legendz
        FFR Player
        • Apr 2004
        • 139

        #4
        Re: To pay homage

        Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
        You sure are intent on posting this everywhere, aren't you. This is the third time I have seen this thread by you.

        Seeing as how this is the literature thread, I'll look at it in that respect.

        You can't spell, you don't know grammar (of which Guido has already pointed out), and you sure don't know how to write emotionally.

        If that piece is supposed to "stir emotions" in people then it isn't doing a very good job. It seems rushed, cliche, and it doesn't even go anywhere.

        This is something you expect an American pre-teen to write when asked what George Bush would say to the world after 9/11.
        Once again you point out you know nothing about me and are just as ignorent as your statements. if you were even to look at my location you would NOTICE i'm from canada. and second i'm 18 so you should go look for somone else to flame.
        Hey emo kid can I give u a suggestion.
        Try new johnsons baby shampoo

        NO MORE TEARS!

        How many emo kids does it take to screw in a lightbulb?

        NONE they all sit in the dark crying

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        • TheRapingDragon
          A car crash mind
          • Aug 2005
          • 9788

          #5
          Re: To pay homage

          I don't really care who you are, this could have been written by anyone, I was commenting on the thing you wrote.

          You just seem to be really sensitive.

          Did I say it was written by an American pre-teen, no, I said that the literature itself gave off the impression of being written by an American pre-teen. Hell, if that was your intention then bravo, you pulled it off well.

          Learn to take criticism, your work is not flawless.

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          • GuidoHunter
            is against custom titles
            • Oct 2003
            • 7371

            #6
            Re: To pay homage

            @Reaper: I moved it here from CT, so this is only the second time he's posted it.

            Originally posted by drake_legendz
            Once again you point out you know nothing about me and are just as ignorent as your statements. if you were even to look at my location you would NOTICE i'm from canada. and second i'm 18 so you should go look for somone else to flame.
            Originally posted by THE LITERATURE FORUM RULES
            4. Do not clutter up other people's work [or yours] with arguments, flame wars, or off-topic posts. It does nothing to help and only detracts from the literature.
            One more flagrant rules violation like that and I'll make sure your next hiatus from the FFR forums isn't by choice.

            --Guido


            Originally posted by Grandiagod
            Originally posted by Grandiagod
            She has an asshole, in other pics you can see a diaper taped to her dead twin's back.
            Sentences I thought I never would have to type.

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            • TheRapingDragon
              A car crash mind
              • Aug 2005
              • 9788

              #7
              Re: To pay homage

              Originally posted by GuidoHunter
              @Reaper: I moved it here from CT, so this is only the second time he's posted it.
              Ah, nice one. Didn't notice. I skimmed the work for the main vocal point before replying.

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              • ShastaTwist
                FFR Veteran
                • Sep 2004
                • 599

                #8
                Re: To pay homage

                Originally posted by GuidoHunter
                @Reaper: I moved it here from CT, so this is only the second time he's posted it.





                One more flagrant rules violation like that and I'll make sure your next hiatus from the FFR forums isn't by choice.

                --Guido

                http://andy.mikee385.com
                Is not TheRapingDragon also flaming, to an extent?

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                • GuidoHunter
                  is against custom titles
                  • Oct 2003
                  • 7371

                  #9
                  Re: To pay homage

                  Effectively everything he said was a critique of the writing; there was no direct attack on the author, just on what was written.

                  --Guido


                  Originally posted by Grandiagod
                  Originally posted by Grandiagod
                  She has an asshole, in other pics you can see a diaper taped to her dead twin's back.
                  Sentences I thought I never would have to type.

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                  • TheRapingDragon
                    A car crash mind
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 9788

                    #10
                    Re: To pay homage

                    No, I'm not. Unless you count criticising work as flaming, in which case half the things that people post in the literature forum is flaming.

                    EDIT: Ninja'd, but with exactly what I said haha.

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                    • ShastaTwist
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Sep 2004
                      • 599

                      #11
                      Re: To pay homage

                      Just asking, no need to jump on the Video Chat Moderator.

                      /sulk.

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                      • ryan_anderson31
                        FFR Player
                        • Dec 2006
                        • 101

                        #12
                        Re: To pay homage

                        a great quote "do or do not there is no try"

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                        • ryan_anderson31
                          FFR Player
                          • Dec 2006
                          • 101

                          #13
                          Re: To pay homage

                          do you have any favorite quotes? shastatwist

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