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  • katsmyname
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2004
    • 19
    #1

    Mirror (Poem)

    As she sat there in the dark.
    She wondered what it'd be like in the light.
    I saw her face as she sat there, thinking.
    I found myself wondering what she was.
    I found myself craving what she craved.
    Through her expressions I saw her desires.
    Through her eyes I saw her fears.
    When our eyes locked I realized.
    That what I was looking at was..
    A mirror image of myself.

    - Kat
    Last edited by katsmyname; 01-24-2007, 08:44 PM. Reason: Spelt "image" wrong
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    • tha07carter
      FFR Player
      • Jul 2006
      • 205
      #2
      Re: Mirror (Poem)

      It's nice actually. It felt good reading it knowing that some of what you described in the poem has occurred in my life as I look into a mirror. Great job.

      Do you write poetry for leisure (like me)? Or was this an assignment for English or a writing class?


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        • katsmyname
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2004
          • 19
          #3
          Re: Mirror (Poem)

          I write poems/songs/realllyshort stories/thoughts for pleasure and sometimes to get them off my mind, and in the open. I'm glad you liked it. =)

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            • tha07carter
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2006
              • 205
              #4
              Re: Mirror (Poem)

              Yeah, I do something like that. It helps relieve stress, so instead of blowing up or keeping it internal, I put it on paper. It's great sometimes to go back and re-read what you've written in the past, I get laughs from it!


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                • FoJaR
                  The Worst
                  • Nov 2005
                  • 2816
                  #5
                  Re: Mirror (Poem)

                  i hate to be a simon but that's a pretty cliche poem!

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                    • FictionJunction
                      FFR Player
                      • Nov 2006
                      • 3843
                      #6
                      Re: Mirror (Poem)

                      buy yourself some skill.
                      No structure.. no rhyme scheme.. no steady meter.
                      This is just one sentence after another that expresses a concept that has been expressed for the longest time.
                      Congrats, you're like everyone else.
                      Originally posted by j-rodd123
                      wow

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                        • FoJaR
                          The Worst
                          • Nov 2005
                          • 2816
                          #7
                          Re: Mirror (Poem)

                          he isnt edubardus but he knows what he's talking about!

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                            • Windscarredfaith
                              (づ￣ ³￣)づ watermelon
                              • Mar 2005
                              • 2612
                              #8
                              Re: Mirror (Poem)

                              Originally posted by FictionJunction
                              buy yourself some skill.
                              No structure.. no rhyme scheme.. no steady meter.
                              This is just one sentence after another that expresses a concept that has been expressed for the longest time.
                              Congrats, you're like everyone else.
                              Seconded. Sorry. We're giving honest opinions.

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