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  • 4ERO
    FFR Player
    • May 2006
    • 60
    #1

    Trance/Classical Composition

    Would like some feedback.
    Influenced by Banya, DJ Taka, DJ Amuro, and Chopin of course.
    Please don't hesitate to point out any flaws in the production or in the music, I'm trying to get better at this.

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    http://www.macjams.com/song/27506
    CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store
    jet88: never!
    jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something
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    • Pyroshock
      ε=-dΦ/dt
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jul 2006
      • 1170
      #2
      Re: Trance/Classical Composition

      The kick is really flat.

      Other than that, this is a good track. The piano is quite nice.

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        • 4ERO
          FFR Player
          • May 2006
          • 60
          #3
          Re: Trance/Classical Composition

          Originally posted by Pyroshock
          The kick is really flat.

          Other than that, this is a good track. The piano is quite nice.
          Think a little EQ would fix that? or maybe a sharper kick?
          CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store
          jet88: never!
          jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something

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            • Aerogroove
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2004
              • 140
              #4
              Re: Trance/Classical Composition

              Yeah the kick is a bit too punchy and small. Try some compression and equalization especially on the drums, the mix sounds a little muddy and "small," I don't really know any other word for that. Cool piece all in all though.

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                • shadowraikiri
                  FFR Player
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 269
                  #5
                  Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                  rofl no comment for cuz that website didnt play for my comp lmao damit your song hates me, make it change. xD
                  §ĦλđШŘλΐķĭřĩ™
                  THIS IS TRADEMARKED

                  cant copy this stuff beezy.

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                    • hi19hi19
                      lol happy
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Oct 2005
                      • 12194
                      #6
                      Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                      by muddy, I think AG means that it lacks punch. The first part, until the piano, strikes me as "Cool, there's some bleeps and a drum and some fuzzy sounds in the back. Um, where's the song?" I think the melody (if there is one hidden in there) should be brought out more.

                      Once the piano starts, it gets awesome.

                      I will also agree that the drums are weak. The snare sounds like a garbage can and the kick drum sounds... like a bad kick drum.


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                        • Hollywood13
                          FFR Player
                          • Mar 2006
                          • 38
                          #7
                          Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                          hey i just heard the song, i like the piece overall, good pace and the piano work is easy to listen to as well. Nothing negative or anything i'd have changed, i look forward to more of your songs and good luck getting them stepped

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                            • 4ERO
                              FFR Player
                              • May 2006
                              • 60
                              #8
                              Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                              Originally posted by shadowraikiri
                              rofl no comment for cuz that website didnt play for my comp lmao damit your song hates me, make it change. xD
                              If you can't play it in the browser, you can always hit the download button on the right. Or try a different browser. Sorry for the inconvinience
                              CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store
                              jet88: never!
                              jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something

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                                • 4ERO
                                  FFR Player
                                  • May 2006
                                  • 60
                                  #9
                                  Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                                  By the way, this is all really good feedback! Thanks alot to everyone who posted.
                                  CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store
                                  jet88: never!
                                  jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something

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                                    • iPatcH
                                      Swamp Lemons Rule
                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                      FFR Music Producer
                                      • Dec 2004
                                      • 3370
                                      #10
                                      Re: Trance/Classical Composition

                                      Wow, I haven't seen AG here in ages.

                                      Anyways, yeah, what he said.
                                      put on a donk on it

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