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  • A-J-A-X
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2007
    • 7

    #1

    First song...

    First time I ever actually completed something I was ok with.

    Please tell me what you think.
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  • Starshot
    /DJS\
    FFR Music Producer
    • Dec 2004
    • 1794

    #2
    Re: First song...

    For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

    You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

    Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.

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    • A-J-A-X
      FFR Player
      • Jan 2007
      • 7

      #3
      Re: First song...

      Originally posted by Starshot
      For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

      You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

      Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.
      Thanks. The only reason I know how to do the envelope thing is because I liked to listen to that "20 Bars song" thing in FL studio. Then I was just looking at pattern 2 and then I fould that Filter Cutoff graph w/ that diagonal line.

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      • wickedawesomeful
        Carls, Girls, & Drugs
        FFR Music Producer
        • Dec 2006
        • 3888

        #4
        Re: First song...

        Originally posted by Starshot
        For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

        You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

        Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.
        I pretty much agree here. This was actually really good for a first song. However, it's retardedly repetitive, but that's to be expected. If you keep working on electronic music, you'll get better in no time.
        http://dozemusic.com/

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