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  • lexis_is_icecold24
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2005
    • 260

    #1

    My new story!

    I was thinking of writing another book. But I had no idea what I should write about this time, and so I thought, "Why not making it based of FFR/SM?". That is exactly what I did. Well not really. I only have ideas for it because I only brain stormed so far. I'm going to put what I thought about and tell me if I should make the story!

    The story begins with 3 ordinary friends, Tibs, Doug31, and A2P. They all live close to each other in a small town known as Mimiga Town. Suddenly, and ominous force of villains appear. They walk up to the helpless group of the three and introduce their identity with strange poses. In a ballerina formation they yell their names, "Hyrogashi! Synthlight! And Tasslefoot!". With their combined might they encase the towns inhabitants into lifeless stone. They take the three protagonists to their home base named Kaste Sten in hopes to feed them to their over grown dog MacGravel who always seem to bully around their emo pet dog that whines a lot, Kevin_18. They all escape before their untimely doom, but are stopped later on by a cheap looking superhero named Dan The Man. He informs the trio that they have to search for an ancient artifact book series known as "The Lawn Wakes. They are seemingly impossible to trace, but can receive hints of their location if you all travel to the small paradise of Kirlian Shores.". With this they head of to their destination. They find a pink glimmer in the water which is revealed to be a small octopus who claims his name is Moogy. He then exclaims to them that the first book would be in a abandoned ruins called Mellan. As they reach the end of the ruins, they are faced by an impenetrable wall that boasts a task for the group. It will only unveil it's contents if one sacrifices their life. And so the bold Tibs clutches a nearby cat and eats it. Only to catch the deadly disease Zaghurim, Tibs succumbs to death instantly. The group quickly forget their fallen companion and move one and find the first book. The book conveys a message which informs that books 1, 2, 3, and 4 hold one letter to the secret password to enter a ripple in time that leads to a door labeled "Secret Zombie Room" where they may obtain the power to defeat their desired foes. It also explains that the final book "Black Lawn Finale" held the whole last word of the password, and it gives the two the first letter, "K''.

    After being told by the spirit of the book the other locations of the books, quickly retrieve them. One by one the password got bigger. With the later "K" and now including the additional four and the finale, they letters are "K, A, S, and T... and Sten.". They soon discover the word to be "Kasta Sten", they yell this word at the statue of the Bluemystic. The portal is opened to the Secret Zombie Room and they obtain the power required to defeat the enemy. But not only that, the spirit named Exige tells them they may have one thing they can wish for. Without thinking they both yell, "We want Tibs back!". Exige worked his magic and brought Tibs back from the dead, but not to his original state. Cursed for eating a poor innocent cat, he is doomed to be a cat. He randomly blurts out "180digi!" and ends up becoming his name.

    They later confront the opposing group with all their might. They gain the upper hand until the villains perform a dance of convergence. The three become one and a all powerful being which will be called "HST" (Hyrogashi, Synth, and Tass)
    Though the heroes efforts seem futile, they commit on defeating the monster. With Synths ability of shooting arrows out of his palms, he shoots them in a pattern of jacks and defeats Doug and A2P. 180digi is in the position of being the savior, but also mince meat.

    He receives the help of a street magician dressed in a black garb named Vospi. He was able to call upon the powers of the 2 ultimate dragons of the underworld, Bahamut-X and Shashikiro. With their help, 180digi brings HST's reign of darkness and blight to an end. He then resurrects his fallen companions with the miracle drug Novacaine.

    This is only a little bit of it. I am going to more side stories and plots that deals with the characters, Bursurk Lurk, Kilga, The Evil Hobo, Rai Rai, Patashu, Jimerax, Jewpin, Jasonkey, Guido, and more.
    I have a lot more stuff, but I will yet to reveal it because It think it might be a waste of my time.
    Last edited by lexis_is_icecold24; 01-8-2007, 02:07 AM.


  • jaysquat
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2006
    • 17

    #2
    Re: My new story!

    Wow....ur crazy



    Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?
    Final Fantasy 7

    *Anyone that is good at making gfx please make me an appealing avatar for me?*

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    • -Tibs-
      FFR Player
      • May 2006
      • 5235

      #3
      Re: My new story!

      I see my name.

      brb reading

      Metal covers of vidya game songs

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      • -Tibs-
        FFR Player
        • May 2006
        • 5235

        #4
        Re: My new story!

        Wups I died.

        Metal covers of vidya game songs

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        • Grandiagod
          FFR Player
          • Jul 2004
          • 6122

          #5
          Re: My new story!

          Spell check, grammar, fluent story progression, WHERE ARE YOU?

          Also, generally, you spell out the name of numbers. (eg. Two instead of 2)
          He who angers you conquers you. ~Elizabeth Kenny

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          • lexis_is_icecold24
            FFR Player
            • Jul 2005
            • 260

            #6
            Re: My new story!

            Do you mean where am I in the story?

            I didn't really want a compelling story. I am making this a wacky break of seriousness. But that is if I make it.


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            • xObserveRx
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Aug 2003
              • 1148

              #7
              Re: My new story!

              Grandia's right on pretty much everything.

              Seriously, my TWG story is better, and I make it up on the spot.

              Actually, almost ANY TWG story made so far is better than this one.

              Don't give up, give your work more attention.
              Come Play The Werewolf Game!

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              • mead1
                Cerebellumberjack
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Aug 2003
                • 3960

                #8
                Re: My new story!

                This is terrible, and I am not in it. Double Fail.

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