I'm usually good at writing essays, but I want some tips and examples that I can study from so that I'm even better. If you have an essay laying around that you did well on, or you typed one on your pc, can you post it here? I'd like to study someone's essay so that I could compare to how it is different than mine. The only issue I have with essays are repeating myself in the conclusion and going "That is how the *blah blah topic*. The reason for this*blah blah topic* were shown." I'd like to improve that now as a freshman so that essays on DBQs will be better structured. If I can find one of my essays then I'll post it here for critique. Until then, can someone who is experienced with essays post their work here so that I may study them and others and criticize them?
-DJ
-DJ