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  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #1

    The Orchestra

    My next full scale project. Probably will end up being around Twofaced length.

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    The Orchestra

    I came to my family twelve years ago. I never had a family before. I lived in an orphanage until I was fifteen. I ran away that year. From that point onward, I lived on the largesse of others. Sadly, in a country as poor as my own, that wasn’t nearly enough to live on. Somehow I made it through that year. I remember that night well. It was the night I became a part of a whole.

    It was December 27th, two days after my first Christmas alone. It had been a good day, the soup kitchen had been serving beef stew, and I had found an extra coat. At that point, I was living in the cellar of a wealthy man on Ducaine Street. He never came down there, and the external entrance was always left unlocked. I decided that night to indulge myself in a bit of his wine. Being but a small child at that point, I did not know my limits. I don’t remember much more then small pieces of that night until the end. One way or another, I ended up outside. I was clutching my second bottle… Or was it third? No matter. At that point, I could not walk or see properly. I stumbled a ways, singing to myself, vaguely aware that I should probably be getting back to my cellar.

    Hours later I laid down. I was on someone’s porch. It didn’t much matter. I was rather tired. Had fortune not smiled warmly on me that night, I certainly would have frozen in the night. Fate had far more interesting plans for me, however. The door I was lying not two feet from swung open a few moments later. I could hear voices.

    “Sten, take a look at this. There’s a drunk on our porch.”

    “He’s too young to be a drunk. He can’t be more then fifteen.”

    “Regardless of what he is, what he’s doing is lying on our porch. Shouldn’t we do something to help him?”

    “Yeah, probably. Bring him in. He can meet Father when he comes around.”

    I was vaguely aware that I was being moved. The next thing I knew, I was resting on a rug near the fire. I heard one of the men apologize to me, saying they didn’t have much room, and it was the best they could do for now. I mumbled some sort of thanks, and slept.

    I awoke the next morning. I looked around to try to figure out where I had ended up in last night’s travels. There was a man seated in a rocking chair. He must have been around fifty then. Despite this, he looked much older. His hair was a shade whiter then the snow outside, and his face displayed his many wrinkles proudly. He saw I had awoken and spoke, his voice sounded far stronger then he looked.

    “Son, you have awoken. You have come to my family in rags and without a coin to your name, and we want to help you.”

    “Well, that’s good to hear. I don’t get much help around here. Can I ask you where I am? My memory of last night is a bit foggy.”

    “You are in a farmhouse six miles east from Skinsend.”

    I wondered briefly to myself how I managed to wander six miles out of town in a drunken stupor. Looking back, I must have been guided by fate.

    “I want to offer you a place in my home, as we do need someone to play the flute. You see, I run a small traveling musical performance. This is where we live when not on the road. Our last flute player tragically passed on during the journey home. Poor Charles had a nasty spill off the Gaines Bridge. We are family here, and need men we can trust. You are yet young, and have sworn no fealty to the world. If you will stay, you can be one of us.”

    I readily agreed. Considering what my life had been up to that point, a family of musicians was better then not having a family at all.

    “What is your name, young man?”

    “Tony, sir.”

    “Then Tony, I welcome you to our company. My name is Martin, but call me Father as the others do. Though I have no children by birth, all whom I take in are my children. You will have three meals a day, an instrument to play, and maybe even a proper place to sleep.”

    This is what he promised me. I found that I received so much more from the kindness of my new family. After meeting father, the two men that had found me last night dragged me into another room and cleaned me. I imagine I looked quite a mess at that point. I hadn’t had a bath in months, and my clothes were ragged. My hair was a nest for all sorts of heinous things. Once my being had been properly purged of a year’s impurities, they gave me new clothes.

    “If you are to join us, you must look the part.” Sten said.

    Something about what he said struck me in an odd fashion. Look the part for what? I decided it didn’t much matter. Whatever play I was acting in was certainly better then being in no play at all. So I was dressed in finer clothing then ever I had before, and my hair was combed, looking in the mirror, I could scarcely recognize the man there as myself.

    I asked the men their names, though I already knew one.

    “You will find this out soon enough” The man who was not Sten said.

    This time I was not dragged, but led, into yet another room. In this room I was given a coat. We left the room and went out into the cold winter air. I asked where we were going, and Sten pointed to a barn a few hundred yards away. We marched through the snow. I was glad they had given me sturdy boots, as it had snowed more since last night. We reached the barn. The man who wasn’t Sten opened the door. I saw that the inside was of the deepest black. Sten pushed me inside. Then he and the other man closed the door behind me. I was alone in a dark barn. I could see nothing around me. Then, someone struck a match. I saw the face of my new Father. Then, the sound of ten other matches striking.

    I saw eleven faces in the dark, all smiling at me. I was terrified. Then four of them lit lamps they were holding, and the barn was flooded with lights. The others blew out their matches in one quick synchronized motion, as if moved by one mind. Each of them had an instrument. Once the matches were snuffed and thrown to the ground, they began to play. Such a sound I had never heard before. It was music played with true passion. I stood in the middle of the barn, taking a moment to view each player. After what seemed like a delightful eternity, the music ended.

    “Welcome, Tony, to the family.” Father said.

    “These are your new brothers and sisters.”

    He took me around the circle to meet them. There were Tino, Milo, and Malcom who all played Violins. Sten played the Cello, as did the man who had assisted in my bringing here. I found his name was Hans. Sara and Christiania danced while clicking the castanets. Marcello and Victoria had been married for a few years, and each sported a mandolin. Tina played the flute, being the sole lone player aside from Father. Father himself sang. He sang with a voice that didn’t seem to belong to him. Despite his aged appearance, he sang with the intensity of a far younger man. When the introductions were through, he gave me a bit more insight into the operation they ran.

    “The song you heard just now is not one we play outside of this barn. In an actual performance, only about half of us play at a time. We don’t want to overpower the audience with our craft. This is why we all pick up other talents to amuse the masses. Think of our group not as a rather large band, but as a rather small carnival.”

    This was the best way anyone could have put it, I soon learned. Sten and Hans were both masters of juggling, Tino was a contortionist, Milo was able to balance about anything on his forehead for an extended period of time, Malcom was a snake charmer, Marcello played the part of the strongman. The women were magicians. Sara dealt in blades, Christiania in cards, Victoria in appearances, and Tina in disappearances. Father didn’t mention if he had a side act, I assumed he did not. Since he was the only singer in the troup, he probably preformed each time. He did, however, explain how I fit in to all of this.

    “So, as you may have realized, poor Tina is without a brother flute-player. This is what you shall do. Each day she shall instruct you to play. When she has deemed you able, you will perform along with the rest of us. I would suggest you also pick one of us to learn a side-act from, unless you have a talent of your own.”

    I would like to note to the reader at this moment that I was currently smitten with Sara almost completely. She was by many measures the finest girl I had ever laid eyes upon, and I felt as though I should devote myself to her service for the remainder of my life. I was a teenager, and a bit naïve, but mostly stupid. I spoke up quickly.

    “Well, I think I’d like to learn blade skills from Sara, Father, if that’s alright.”

    There were some laughs from the family. Sara Smiled. Father eyed me for a moment, raised an eyebrow then chuckled heartily.

    “Alright son, a male magician it is. Your days from now until your first performance shall be devoted almost entirely to studying from Tina and Sara. Remember that it is essential for you to learn both these skills well. Everyone in this room will tell you, we need every hand possible to put on the best show.”

    Then there was a party. I suppose it was a sort of welcome for me. I ate and drank and was merry. It was a good time to get to know everyone. Or it would have been, if I hadn’t spent the whole time at Sara’s arm jabbering ceaselessly on about my life. She tried several times to shoo me off, but I was relentless. That night I slept on a straw mattress in a back room of the house. It truly was a huge house.

    The next day I delivered myself to Sara’s room, filled with ecstasy at seeing her again. When I entered, I took the room in. The whole room was covered in blades. From stilettos to full bastard swords, there was no sharp edge that could not be found in this room. I could almost not tell the color of her walls, for so many blades on the walls. I was only amazed by this for a moment, however, as I then glued my eyes to Sara, who was looking even lovelier then I remembered from the previous night.

    “Hello Tony, I see you made it here alright. I hope you brought gloves today, as you will probably injure yourself.”

    I was caught up in the moment, and in her eyes. I was hypnotized by her eyes. I knelt down and plucked up all of my courage.

    “Sara, I know we met only last night, but I feel as though I could spend the rest of my life with you. Would you consent to being my bride?”

    I was not a smart teenager. Yet, does such a thing ever exist? Sara smiled.

    “Tony, in my life I have turned down well far past fifty proposals. But since you are my student today, and you are family, I will give you a chance to have my hand. A magician must always carry his or her props with them on the stage in a concealed manner. If you can find every blade I have concealed on my person, I will marry you.”

    I barely let her finish before I began to pat her down. Not for a moment did I cease. It was almost comical the amount of blades I found. The girl had more on her person then she did on her walls. Now, being a man, I spent a bit more time then absolutely necessary around her chest. I was confident, however, that I had found them all. I had about ten pounds of metal at my feet. From pins to daggers onward to a full katana blade she had strapped to her back.

    “Time is up.”

    I stood back.

    “Sadly Tony, you have failed like all the others. Observe.”

    She proceeded to pull three more knives from each sleeve, a razor in her collar, and it looked as though she pulled a knife from either ear, though I could not be sure. I was astounded to be certain. Finally, and with great showmanship, she removed a final dagger from her mouth.

    “Now, this dagger here is special.”

    “Why is that?” I don’t think I kept the sorrow out of my voice.

    “Because this is your dagger Tony. It shall have your name on it.”

    She pulled a quill from a nearby desk and wrote “Tony” on the blade. She then once more hid it somewhere on her person.

    “That is the dagger that shall have your heart if ever again you seek to touch my chest.”

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    Fin part one
  • Tokzic
    FFR Player
    • May 2005
    • 6878

    #2
    Re: The Orchestra

    first

    Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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    • Nikkis
      Banned
      • Nov 2006
      • 81

      #3
      Re: The Orchestra

      The end was humorous, I liked it. I'm going to stick with reading this series. Not much to say other than a few possible grammatical errors. I think you should give a better physical description of the characters. Especially Sara so that the reader can get a better image of her loveliness. I didn't see a physical description of Tony in there either. Other than that I enjoyed it. I'll be here when you type chapter 2.

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      • mead1
        Cerebellumberjack
        FFR Simfile Author
        • Aug 2003
        • 3960

        #4
        Re: The Orchestra

        Yeah, this was posted mainly for tokzic to read it since he can't do direct connect. Really that wasn't a chapter, and it gives no idea for what the story is actually about. I'll write a bunch more later. Also, I tend to stray from physical description, it allows more imagination on the reader's part. That and I'm lazy.

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        • mead1
          Cerebellumberjack
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Aug 2003
          • 3960

          #5
          Re: The Orchestra

          Needless to say, from that point forward, I made no effort to pursue Sara’s affections. She spent most of the time teaching me how to properly conceal a blade. I could see this was going to be one of the more painful things I learned. I was correct, and I knew this the first time I accidentally gouged my side. Fortunately, I was moving warily already, and the wound wasn’t deep. Sara deemed I had received enough “training” for the day, and that I should probably go rest before I had to go learn my instrument. I took her offer readily, still gripping my side. I slept for nearly an hour before Tina showed up in my room with the flute of their former flute-player.

          “Oh, Hello there, Tina.”

          “So, did Sara have to write your name on a blade?” She asked conversationally.

          “How did you know?”
          “Well, you aren’t the first man to join our family. Ask Milo or Malcom sometime. Franklin too…” Her voice trailed off.

          “Franklin?”

          “The last flute player. The one who got run over by the wagon.”

          “Father said he fell off the Gaines Bridge.”

          “Father says lots of things. Don’t worry yourself about Franklin though. Your concern for now is to learn how to play his instrument.”

          And so it went from there. My days for the next month or so were enjoyable enough. I came to know each member of the family as though they truly were my brother or sister. I picked up skill with the flute quickly enough. I didn’t quite get the hang of the blades though. I guess I never got over that first day. Slowly, I felt myself becoming a part of the group. Then it came, the moment of truth, my first performance night. The off season was over, and the group was ready. I would be playing, as I had yet to gain any skill in anything else. It was the night I would truly become one of the family.

          I prepared for that night much like I had been prepared for my first meeting of the family. I wore fancy clothing, was extremely clean, and looked the part of a fairly high-class musical act. We took the two carriages and hitched them to the horses. Father and Marcello drove the carriages to our destination. It was a little tight, with five people in each, but I didn’t much mind. I was too busy trying to keep from throwing up from nerves. Milo, who had become a staunch friend, was trying to talk to me, but I didn’t look at him for fear he would end up with a face full of my last meal. At last we arrived. I got out and saw a house even larger and grander then our home. This was truly the home of a very wealthy man. We entered, and were greeted by a man in a black suit coat who was presumably the owner.

          “Hello, hello, glad to have you. It was so kind of you to offer your services for free. I’ve heard many good things about this troupe. The party is to start in half an hour, so if you could just get to setting up anywhere in the main room, that would be exquisite. I’m Count Vandemar, if you need anything, just find me or my wife. I must go and continue with the preparations.”

          I spoke up after he left. “Wait, we’re playing for free?”

          Father turned to me. “Tony, don’t worry about money. I have enough to keep us fed and clothed many times over. We are here for other reasons.”

          Marcello spoke up, motioning to where the count had walked. “So he’s the one?”

          Father nodded grimly. “Yes indeed. Nice fellow, it seems. Pity.”

          I wanted to take the opportunity to ask what they were talking about, but I was learning my family was one in which you didn’t ask questions, you simply did as you were told. The room we were to be performing in was gigantic. It was maybe thrice the width of our large barn back at home. I stayed quiet, and followed the others who were playing tonight. It was Malcom, Sten, Christiania, Marcello, Father and myself. It was rather intimidating, because we never practiced together. I had no idea how my part would fit in with the rest. Again, I decided it was best just to do as I was told. We were to play in the center of the room, while the other various entertainments would take place in other areas of the room.

          When the guests started to arrive, they amused themselves with idle chatter and refreshments, wondering at when we would begin to entertain them. The room was nearly full when Father stood on a table to speak.

          “Hello. I am Father Martin, and I would like to welcome you to the first performance of the year of our humble group. I would remind you that there is much going on at any given time, so be sure to examine all of what we have to offer. This being said, I invite you to hear our opening number for the night. You may recognize it…”

          He went on describing the piece and where it had come from. I went over my part again and again in my mind, full aware that screwing this up would make the whole family look terrible. I watched Father, truly a raconteur, that man. He had the guests at his beck and call. When he settled back to his position, they began to move and speak in a flurry as though a spell had been lifted. Amidst the chaotic movement of the guests, we began to play. Father gave the signal, and the song began.

          Despite my nerves, I played flawlessly. After the music had begun, I felt that I could do no wrong. I was an arm of an independent being of sound. The music was every bit as overpowering as it had been that night so long ago in the barn. The difference being that now I was part of it. Truly I felt I was part of the family now.

          We played for hours. We didn’t have enough songs to play that long, so eventually we simply began the list anew. The crowd didn’t seem to notice or mind. We packed up our equipment as the crowd dispersed. Most of the guests had left. I went to watch the end of Milo’s act. He had a chair balanced by one leg on either hand and a champagne glass on the nose. I wasn’t sure how he got to that point, but it was certainly impressive. In a grand finale, he tossed one chair into the air, hopped on the other, and caught the first chair on his chin, after removing the champagne glass. It really was more interesting then it must sound being re-told. Regardless, he put everything down, took a bow, and his act was over. The others had already finished and were putting away the equipment. I couldn’t see where Marcello was though. I assumed he was somewhere nearby. I helped Milo pack up.

          “Well done man. That bit with the champagne glass was brilliant.”

          “Yes, well, I’ve done it a thousand times now.”
          “The crowd loved you.”

          “That’s because I’m devilishly handsome, not because my act is good. I see you managed to not lose your innards.”

          “Yeah, I managed. It went really well. The music sounded fantastic, and I had quite a time. I guess I’m one of you guys now.”

          “Well, not quite yet.”

          “What do you mean?”

          “You’ll see soon enough.”

          I pressed him to explain himself, but he refused to tell me. I grabbed my stuff and made for the carriage with the rest. As I got into the carriage, I was shocked at what I saw. Count Vandemar was bound and gagged. Father, Marcello, and Sara were sitting calmly nearby. Milo came in behind me and shut the door.

          “Father, what’s going on here?”

          “It’s time for you to become a part of the family Tony. I need to see that I can trust you.” Father said. He opened his palm to Sara, who with a flick of her wrist procured a sharp curved blade, and handed it to him. Father handed it to me.

          “Tony, take that blade, and slice this man’s throat.”

          This man had served me food about an hour earlier. I was not especially keen on killing him. On the other hand, it was an order from my Father. I trusted him. He had to trust me. I needed to do this.

          I spilled the Count’s blood that night. I don’t think the stain ever came out of the carriage floor.

          I was astounded at how it had felt to kill. I had wondered once or twice before, what it would be to snuff out another’s candle of life. I had wondered if I would feel loss at some part of my own soul, or if it would hurt me somehow. What surprised me is that I felt nothing. I felt no different extinguishing a life then I did doing anything else. I decided at that moment that those who made something large of death were merely weak themselves. Death came. It simply was. Come it from disease or age or blade, it would come. I lost my fear that night.

          Once I had done it, the others threw the corpse into the river as we rode by. Father spoke to me once it had been done.

          “Son, you have done well. Tonight after we arrive back to the house, follow me to the study. I will explain to you what you need to know.”

          I was unsure what to make of this, but I assumed there was a reason he had ordered me to kill that man. I nodded and dozed on the way back.

          We arrived later, and I followed Father to the study. He hung his coat near the fire, sat down, and began to speak.

          “Tony, as you may have noticed, our country of Tieren is in a bad way right now. Our King levies ridiculous taxes, makes unnecessary and expensive wars, and is in the process of placing a golden statue of himself in each town. He is probably insane, and certainly senile at his advanced age. Anyone you speak to will tell you that he is incapable of ruling. If you ask anyone what they would do about it, they will shrug. They don’t think there is anything they can do. I know otherwise. You see, the King’s family line is one that has been interbreeding for centuries. Outside of the royal family, he had a total of 24 family members. Two Aunts and Uncles, and two generations of obscure cousins. I myself am a cousin of the King. Nine years ago, I had an idea. Being the youngest member of the King’s family, I could gain the crown if all of the others were to meet some sort of unfortunate end. So it was at this point I formed our little troupe here. Each member has done what you have done tonight. Some have killed more then one. But we do all this for the good of the country. We all work for the greater good. We position ourselves to get as close to a member of the King’s family as possible, then do what must be done. The man you killed tonight, Vandebar, was number 18. The task is three fourths done. Once all the other heirs have been removed, we will move our sights to the king himself. Do you have any questions, my son?”

          I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. Father had always seemed a kind gentleman type, but here he was scheming about usurping the power of the monarch. Part of me wanted to bolt for the door, escape this place, and never stop running. This part was far smaller then the part of me that knew I was in this for the long haul. This was my family. I had killed for them, and would do so again. This was my family. I would work for Father’s success with everything in me. There was one thing that struck me as odd, however, so I enquired about it.

          “Father, has it gone unnoticed that whenever a member of the royal family dies, our troupe has played for them shortly before?”

          He smiled, as though he had been waiting for this question. “That, Tony, is why we practice every day. People remember the good or the bad of an event. We want them to remember the great time they had watching us perform rather then the unfortunate death. This is why we make our shows brilliant and our murders boring.”

          I accepted this. He had gotten away with it for nine years, so he probably knew what he was talking about. I bid Father goodnight, and slept well that night.

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          • Nikkis
            Banned
            • Nov 2006
            • 81

            #6
            Re: The Orchestra

            Awesome. Write more, please.

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            • esupin
              FFR Player
              • Nov 2003
              • 1756

              #7
              Re: The Orchestra

              Haven't been here in almost a month, and it's nice to see some new things up. I don't know if you're even writing more, but on the whole your story is well written. No big errors, and very easy to read. There is one thing you do on occasion, though; you have too many short, choppy sentences in a few areas like these:
              I came to my family twelve years ago. I never had a family before. I lived in an orphanage until I was fifteen. I ran away that year.
              The crowd didn’t seem to notice or mind. We packed up our equipment as the crowd dispersed. Most of the guests had left. I went to watch the end of Milo’s act.
              They're not too noticeable, but maybe you could mix in a long sentence somewhere in between.

              Also, like Nikkis (Lightknight? I'm not keeping up) said, you should try to describe the characters more. We have no idea what any of Tony's other 'siblings' look like. The descriptions you do have are nice, though. By the way, it's spelled Malcolm.

              I wonder what happened to Franklin. Doesn't sound like his death was accidental... people can't even get their stories straight.

              http://www.youtube.com/esupin

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              • mead1
                Cerebellumberjack
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Aug 2003
                • 3960

                #8
                Re: The Orchestra

                I have further plans for this, I just have pushed it aside for various other projects. It will not die.

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