Broadway Sestina

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  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #1

    Broadway Sestina

    As the curtain rises, we see a Woman
    Who just two years ago climbed the Steps
    Clutched in hand, a small amount of Money
    Before Broadway she’d had less than a Life
    Her days spent weeping over Love
    She traded her sorrows for the Stage

    Now she lived for the Stage
    More a Marionette then a Woman
    Who sang and danced and felt Love
    For the masses waiting beyond the Steps
    For her own she had no other Life
    Performance was worth more than Money

    She never had quite enough Money
    She had sold her soul for the Stage
    It was a lonely, troubled Life
    For a girl quickly turned Woman
    Who had climbed at sixteen the Steps
    After finally losing her Love

    She had filled the void with a new Love
    One she couldn’t buy with Money
    To those who climbed the Steps
    And viewed the brightly-lit Stage
    She was the picture of a Woman
    Who had great joy in her Life

    The end soon came of that Life
    Men with tools killed her Love
    She was once more a broken Woman
    With not nearly enough Money
    Remembering the old Stage
    She wept silently on the Steps

    An hour later, she left the Steps
    Without any semblance of Life
    Lost without the lights of the Stage
    After that she knew no Love
    Though she faked it for Money
    They wanted a body, Not a Woman

    The curtain falls in front of a Woman, lying dead on the Steps
    She was found without Money, or anything to link her to Life
    Unable to cope with the loss of love, She had followed the Stage

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    Sestinas ftw!
    Last edited by mead1; 12-27-2006, 09:13 AM.
  • Jamaican Jew
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2006
    • 254

    #2
    Re: Broadway Sestina

    As usual, this is very well done, and I compliment your ability to write in a style that proves difficult for most others. Sestinas are too long and repetative for my taste; take off a stanza or two and they might be more appealing.

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