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  • FoJaR
    The Worst
    • Nov 2005
    • 2816

    #1

    my english paper

    Heads or Tails?

    The Machine that Won the War is a short story by Isaac Asimov about a machine that won a war. The machine is called multivac because it used to be a vacuum. I think it was one of those vacuums that is in the walls of the house and then you can plug a tube into the wall and it just sucks no matter where in the house you are. Anyways, it was a really cool vacuum, so cool that they decided to turn it into a super-freaking-amazing computer. This computer was how they won the war against the bad-guys. The computer was awesome and always made the right choices, but it turns out that everybody was just making the computer up and some guy was flipping a coin. Pretty lame ending if you ask me. In the book “war in the age of intelligent machines” by Manuel De Landa, Manny talks about how machines make all the decisions and soon machines will rule the world. I think this is a load of nonsense because everyone knows that all you have to do is unplug the machine for it to run out of power and die (well it’s not really dead but that’s not the point I guess). So I think manuel is paranoid and he needs a psychiatrist.

    So heads or tails?
  • jewpinthethird
    (The Fat's Sabobah)
    FFR Music Producer
    • Nov 2002
    • 11711

    #2
    Re: my english paper

    Did you write this by mistake or something?

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    • FoJaR
      The Worst
      • Nov 2005
      • 2816

      #3
      Re: my english paper

      i dont think that was your carrot

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      • DarkProdigy
        FFR Veteran
        • Aug 2005
        • 893

        #4
        Re: my english paper

        Post your grade when you get it.
        Are you a stepartist?

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        • FoJaR
          The Worst
          • Nov 2005
          • 2816

          #5
          Re: my english paper

          LOL

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          • jewpinthethird
            (The Fat's Sabobah)
            FFR Music Producer
            • Nov 2002
            • 11711

            #6
            Re: my english paper

            Two gold stars and a blue one next to his name.

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            • FoJaR
              The Worst
              • Nov 2005
              • 2816

              #7
              Re: my english paper

              damn you jewpin

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              • guitarbabe
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2006
                • 9

                #8
                Re: my english paper

                yeah the grade you get will be interesting.

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                • tsugomaru
                  FFR Player
                  • Aug 2004
                  • 3962

                  #9
                  Re: my english paper

                  This looks written.
                  I can tell from reading the written work and seeing quite a few written works in my day.

                  And somehow, this paper appears as if that one chance in Heisenburg's Uncertainty Principle came about.

                  ~Tsugomaru
                  Originally posted by Hiluluk
                  WHEN do you think people die...?
                  When their heart is pierced by a bullet from a pistol...? No.
                  When they succumb to an incurable disease...? No.
                  When they drink soup made with a poisonous mushroom...? NO!!!
                  IT'S WHEN A PERSON IS FORGOTTEN...!!!

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                  • FoJaR
                    The Worst
                    • Nov 2005
                    • 2816

                    #10
                    Re: my english paper

                    h bar over 2 baby

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                    • jewpinthethird
                      (The Fat's Sabobah)
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Nov 2002
                      • 11711

                      #11
                      Re: my english paper

                      You argument is solid and your use of modern laymen dialect speaks to an often forgotten about class of people who lack any taste in literature whatsoever. You use of this dialect is edgy, and often I find that I dislike essays written in such a manner, but you pulled it off quite gracefully. I applaud you for that. However, in order to give you a more accurate criticism of your work, I must read another same of your writing.

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                      • Windscarredfaith
                        (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ watermelon
                        • Mar 2005
                        • 2612

                        #12
                        Re: my english paper

                        A+

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                        • FoJaR
                          The Worst
                          • Nov 2005
                          • 2816

                          #13
                          Re: my english paper

                          unfortunately my actual paper wasnt much better

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                          • jewpinthethird
                            (The Fat's Sabobah)
                            FFR Music Producer
                            • Nov 2002
                            • 11711

                            #14
                            Re: my english paper

                            sad emoticon

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