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  • lord_carbo
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2004
    • 6222
    #1

    Song: Variations

    http://media.putfile.com/Level-Eleven-Paladin---Variations


    This is the first song I've ever made that I take pride in. I have two others but they really aren't as complete and good as this. So this one needs some criticism. Point out everything you like and don't like.

    Thanks.
    last.fm
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    • T0rajir0u
      FFR Player
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Aug 2005
      • 2946
      #2
      Re: Song: Variations

      what plugin do i need

      ps variations.sm
      hehe

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        • Pyroshock
          ε=-dΦ/dt
          FFR Music Producer
          • Jul 2006
          • 1170
          #3
          Re: Song: Variations

          First off, it's pretty quiet.

          The song is alright, but it's not bad at all for your third song. I like the drums.

          The only major problem I have with it is the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.

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            • T0rajir0u
              FFR Player
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Aug 2005
              • 2946
              #4
              Re: Song: Variations

              Originally posted by Pyroshock
              the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.
              atonal hehe
              hehe

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                • lord_carbo
                  FFR Player
                  • Dec 2004
                  • 6222
                  #5
                  Re: Song: Variations

                  Thanks Pyro. In fact, my intention for the song was to practice using drums because I'm not good with them.

                  Originally posted by Pyroshock
                  The only major problem I have with it is the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.
                  Ahhh, now that I listen to it it a few of the notes seem misplaced at times, mainly in the middle. I'll see how I can fix that up.
                  Last edited by lord_carbo; 10-10-2006, 09:05 PM.
                  last.fm

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                    • iPatcH
                      Swamp Lemons Rule
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Dec 2004
                      • 3370
                      #6
                      Re: Song: Variations

                      how about doing something with the breaks aside from looping it over and over again
                      put on a donk on it

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                        • lord_carbo
                          FFR Player
                          • Dec 2004
                          • 6222
                          #7
                          Re: Song: Variations

                          Originally posted by iPatcH
                          how about doing something with the breaks aside from looping it over and over again
                          Okay.

                          PS: Daft Punk rofl
                          Last edited by lord_carbo; 10-11-2006, 12:38 PM.
                          last.fm

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                            • iPatcH
                              Swamp Lemons Rule
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              FFR Music Producer
                              • Dec 2004
                              • 3370
                              #8
                              Re: Song: Variations

                              Originally posted by lord_carbo
                              Okay.

                              PS: Daft Punk rofl
                              At least they have the talent to pull it off and make it sound good.
                              put on a donk on it

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                                • XXXsmittyXXX
                                  Anxiety monster
                                  • Jul 2005
                                  • 6924
                                  #9
                                  Re: Song: Variations

                                  Im tired

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                                    • lord_carbo
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Dec 2004
                                      • 6222
                                      #10
                                      Re: Song: Variations

                                      Originally posted by iPatcH
                                      At least they have the talent to pull it off and make it sound good.
                                      And they've been making music how long?
                                      last.fm

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