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  • lord_carbo
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2004
    • 6222

    #1

    Song: Variations



    This is the first song I've ever made that I take pride in. I have two others but they really aren't as complete and good as this. So this one needs some criticism. Point out everything you like and don't like.

    Thanks.
    last.fm
  • T0rajir0u
    FFR Player
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2005
    • 2946

    #2
    Re: Song: Variations

    what plugin do i need

    ps variations.sm
    hehe

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    • Pyroshock
      ε=-dΦ/dt
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jul 2006
      • 1170

      #3
      Re: Song: Variations

      First off, it's pretty quiet.

      The song is alright, but it's not bad at all for your third song. I like the drums.

      The only major problem I have with it is the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.

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      • T0rajir0u
        FFR Player
        FFR Simfile Author
        • Aug 2005
        • 2946

        #4
        Re: Song: Variations

        Originally posted by Pyroshock
        the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.
        atonal hehe
        hehe

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        • lord_carbo
          FFR Player
          • Dec 2004
          • 6222

          #5
          Re: Song: Variations

          Thanks Pyro. In fact, my intention for the song was to practice using drums because I'm not good with them.

          Originally posted by Pyroshock
          The only major problem I have with it is the melody. Some parts of it just sound like...random notes.
          Ahhh, now that I listen to it it a few of the notes seem misplaced at times, mainly in the middle. I'll see how I can fix that up.
          Last edited by lord_carbo; 10-10-2006, 09:05 PM.
          last.fm

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          • iPatcH
            Swamp Lemons Rule
            FFR Simfile Author
            FFR Music Producer
            • Dec 2004
            • 3370

            #6
            Re: Song: Variations

            how about doing something with the breaks aside from looping it over and over again
            put on a donk on it

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            • lord_carbo
              FFR Player
              • Dec 2004
              • 6222

              #7
              Re: Song: Variations

              Originally posted by iPatcH
              how about doing something with the breaks aside from looping it over and over again
              Okay.

              PS: Daft Punk rofl
              Last edited by lord_carbo; 10-11-2006, 12:38 PM.
              last.fm

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              • iPatcH
                Swamp Lemons Rule
                FFR Simfile Author
                FFR Music Producer
                • Dec 2004
                • 3370

                #8
                Re: Song: Variations

                Originally posted by lord_carbo
                Okay.

                PS: Daft Punk rofl
                At least they have the talent to pull it off and make it sound good.
                put on a donk on it

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                • XXXsmittyXXX
                  Anxiety monster
                  • Jul 2005
                  • 6924

                  #9
                  Re: Song: Variations

                  Im tired

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                  • lord_carbo
                    FFR Player
                    • Dec 2004
                    • 6222

                    #10
                    Re: Song: Variations

                    Originally posted by iPatcH
                    At least they have the talent to pull it off and make it sound good.
                    And they've been making music how long?
                    last.fm

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