First things first. This is a clean furry story, nothin' dirty. PG-13 to be exact. And no, not all Furrys are dirty and perverted. Anyways, PLEASE, for the love of God, make your comments in plain English. Noob talk is very annoying to translate. The main char's thoughts are in all capitals and no quotation marks...yes, I use proper English.
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Last edited by firestrike141; 09-30-2006, 12:52 PM.Dreamers make the world...yet we are ignored....we create the future, and there is no point to take it farther. Good day to you. -
Re: Tell me what you think of my first chapter.
Furries aren't appreciated here. I'd reccomend you don't post it.
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Chapt. 1:
WHY ME. That thought was bouncing around my head like a superball in a 4' by 4' cell with a 5 minute head start.Dreamers make the world...yet we are ignored....we create the future, and there is no point to take it farther. Good day to you.Comment
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Re: Tell me what you think of my first chapter.
....Guess what? You just ruined my post. XPDreamers make the world...yet we are ignored....we create the future, and there is no point to take it farther. Good day to you.Comment
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Re: Tell me what you think of my first chapter.
Mkay. I won't.Dreamers make the world...yet we are ignored....we create the future, and there is no point to take it farther. Good day to you.Comment
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Don't triple-post either.Comment
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Re: Tell me what you think of my first chapter.
Why did you post 5 times about how you were going to post your chapter, but didn't even do so?
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Re: Tell me what you think of my first chapter.
PLEASE post your story. As a FFR Staff member I promise you that you will only be harshly flamed for your literature, not your furry ways.
Plus, I wanna record myself telling a story.Comment
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no dude!!!! don't let them get you down post it~~~
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