Moonlight-a poem by me =)

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  • Redorigami
    Call me Massive Swallow
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Oct 2005
    • 3162

    #1

    Moonlight-a poem by me =)

    i hated it, so i removed it from forums
    Last edited by Redorigami; 09-22-2006, 02:03 PM. Reason: didnt like it
    Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
    The ability to lick the clit and the vagina and apply gentle pressure at the same time with one upward lick is something the small tongued of us can only dream about.
    Originally posted by spreadNv
    Got dibs on La Camp.
    Oh right, Im not any good.
    Got dibs on Pita.
  • this_n00b_rocks
    Banned
    • Aug 2006
    • 510

    #2
    Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

    I'm guessing you write alot of poems. I'm not much of a poem person, but that was pretty good.

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    • Redorigami
      Call me Massive Swallow
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Oct 2005
      • 3162

      #3
      Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

      Yes, I have been writing poetry since around 5 or 6 years old. I think poems are the best form of writing because it allows you to use very few words but emphasizes meaning and paints vivid pictures in the readers mind.
      Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
      The ability to lick the clit and the vagina and apply gentle pressure at the same time with one upward lick is something the small tongued of us can only dream about.
      Originally posted by spreadNv
      Got dibs on La Camp.
      Oh right, Im not any good.
      Got dibs on Pita.

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      • xxrockerxx
        FFR Player
        • Jul 2005
        • 1

        #4
        Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

        whoa!! that was absolutey beautiful i loved it i write poems but not as good as that EVER lol keep writing never stop you are soo freakin good at it im jealous lol

        caitlin

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        • Redorigami
          Call me Massive Swallow
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Oct 2005
          • 3162

          #5
          Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

          Thats a very generous compliment. Thank you.
          Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
          The ability to lick the clit and the vagina and apply gentle pressure at the same time with one upward lick is something the small tongued of us can only dream about.
          Originally posted by spreadNv
          Got dibs on La Camp.
          Oh right, Im not any good.
          Got dibs on Pita.

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          • silverdust800
            FFR Player
            • Jul 2006
            • 54

            #6
            Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

            i liked it but i got a lil confused in the begenning for the part where u turn into stone but then i got it later, i dont read or write much poetry that isnt love so ild say it was good seeing as how i got thro the whole thing. give ur self a pat on the back (not literlay unless u wanna)
            ~♥♪♪~.:emma:.♪♪♥~

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            • Redorigami
              Call me Massive Swallow
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Oct 2005
              • 3162

              #7
              Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

              Wow, the forums down here are pretty empty. I think it should be advertised or something. I almost would have never found it.
              Last edited by Redorigami; 09-19-2006, 05:21 PM.
              Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
              The ability to lick the clit and the vagina and apply gentle pressure at the same time with one upward lick is something the small tongued of us can only dream about.
              Originally posted by spreadNv
              Got dibs on La Camp.
              Oh right, Im not any good.
              Got dibs on Pita.

              Comment

              • Redorigami
                Call me Massive Swallow
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Oct 2005
                • 3162

                #8
                Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)

                Wow, no more comments? Bummer....
                Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
                The ability to lick the clit and the vagina and apply gentle pressure at the same time with one upward lick is something the small tongued of us can only dream about.
                Originally posted by spreadNv
                Got dibs on La Camp.
                Oh right, Im not any good.
                Got dibs on Pita.

                Comment

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