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  • TAKING_BACK_MONDAY
    FFR Player
    • Mar 2006
    • 15
    #1

    Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

    if you weren't burning now i'd set you
    ablaze, and watch you burn,
    then fade out.
    If you were real would we be talking now?
    would i be dreaming and drowning,
    in your eyes and the lies behind them?
    I'm severing the ties from you and from life
    from then and tonight in hope of repairing a lost cause.
    Slitting the knots that you have created
    then tying them back together.
    creating more scars than humor, more fear than laughter
    and leaving more dead tissue than was ever meant to.
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    • TAKING_BACK_MONDAY
      FFR Player
      • Mar 2006
      • 15
      #2
      if you can't leave it be might as well make it bleed.

      What you've found sure upsets you
      Never saw it coming did you?
      Its easy to be surprised with both your eyes sewn closed
      Handled with great precision, another thoughtless execution
      You're the subject of this exhibition
      A willing cadaver, a willing cadaver.
      Scalpel, sutured.
      Made whole again.

      These cuts are leaving creases
      Trace the scars, fit the pieces
      Tell your story, you don't need to say a word.
      Call off the cavalry, can't save a wretch like me.
      Clean this with kerosene.
      If you can't leave it be might as well make it bleed.
      Scalpel, sutured.
      Made whole again.

      Your wires are frayed, can't fire right
      You look better when out of sight
      You were not made to stand and fight
      There's something better wrong with you

      Your wires are frayed, can't fire right
      You look better when out of sight
      You were not made to fire right
      There's something better wrong with you

      Your pulse is anemic, you're tired of the fire
      You're bruising too easy and falling behind
      And no one is waiting for you.
      And no one is waiting for you.
      And no one is waiting for you.

      Call off your quarantine, can't save the rest from me
      Clean this with kerosene.
      If you can't leave it be might as well make it bleed.
      Scalpel, Sutured.
      Made whole again.

      Your wires are frayed, can't fire right
      You look better when out of sight
      You were not made to stand and fight
      There's something better wrong with you

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        • TAKING_BACK_MONDAY
          FFR Player
          • Mar 2006
          • 15
          #3
          paper thin Hymn

          When your only friends are hotel rooms
          Hands are distant lullabies
          If I could turn around I would tonight

          These roads never seemed so long
          Since your paper heart stopped beating leaving me suddenly alone
          Will daybreak ever come?

          Who's gonna call on Sunday morning?
          Who's gonna drive you home?
          I just want one more chance
          To put my arms in fragile hands

          I thought you said forever
          Over and over
          A sleepless night becomes bitter oblivion

          These thoughts run through my head
          Over and over
          Complaints of violins become my only friends

          August evenings
          Bring solemn warnings
          To remember to kiss the ones you love goodnight

          You never know what temporal days may bring
          Laugh, love, live free and sing
          When life is in discord
          Praise ye the lord

          Who's gonna call on Sunday morning?
          Who's gonna drive you home?
          I just want one more chance
          To put my arms in fragile hands

          I thought you said forever
          Over and over
          The sleepless night becomes bitter oblivion

          These thoughts run through my head
          Over and over
          Complaints of violins become my only friends

          I thought you said forever
          over and over
          The sleepless night becomes bitter oblivion

          These thoughts run through my head
          over and over
          Complaints of violins become my only friends

          I thought you said forever
          over and over
          These thoughts run through my head

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            • Squeek
              let it snow~
              • Jan 2004
              • 14444
              #4
              Re: Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

              I merged your three poems together.

              Keep them all in one thread. Your post titles reflect the titles of the poems.

              ~Squeek

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                • mattyohh
                  FFR Player
                  • Mar 2006
                  • 349
                  #5
                  Re: Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

                  i think i've heard them in songs before...
                  Originally posted by FishFishRevolution
                  You are banned from the Garbage Bin until January 1st, 2007. Don't worry, I usually let people out of their sentences early if they have good behavior. You are still able to view the Garbage Bin, but if you post there, I will physically site-wide ban you until further notice.

                  Reason: Insulting Dragonforce aka my religion. Also being a general GB noob.

                  -Fish
                  lol

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                    • Tokzic
                      FFR Player
                      • May 2005
                      • 6878
                      #6
                      Re: Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

                      Mead, you've got new material.

                      Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                        • Afrobean
                          Admiral in the Red Army
                          • Dec 2003
                          • 13262
                          #7
                          Re: Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

                          #1: unidentifiable. Easily original material.

                          #2: Dashboard Confessional. Plagerized.

                          #3: Anberlin. Never heard of them, but apparently they do music. Also plagerized.

                          Point of interest: this user has also plagerized another thread of lyrics. Also located in this forum I believe.

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                            • Squeek
                              let it snow~
                              • Jan 2004
                              • 14444
                              #8
                              Re: Simple sad and sweet,but still bleeding.

                              Waste of my time to even try to help this guy.

                              Locked.

                              ~Squeek

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