This is based off of "A Fever You Can't Sweat Out" by "Panic! At The Disco." The songs all fit, some of them need to be re-worded slightly.
It starts out with a narrator singing a song about narrating the following story: It opens with a whore-house, where a young girl has gotten in trouble with the law. Her name is Liza. Anyway, she offers herself up to the police officer there, who drops any charges against her. She also pays her lawyer this way and goes home to her boyfriend, Steve.
They're living together just out of highschool. Liza begins feeling sick and goes to see a doctor, who tells her that she is pregnant. Unwilling to tell Steven the baby isn't his, she forces him to marry her.
Before the ceremony begins, Steven is pacing nervously when he overhears two members of the wedding discussing what a slut Liza is.
Steven decides to marry her anyway, when he over hears the police officer singing a sultry song, asking Liza if it was worth it, who gives in.
Furious, Steven calls off the wedding.
Liza admits to manipulating him, telling him that he's everything a highschool girl could want, but she's grown up and ready to move on. Steven is pissed.
He tries to kill himself and wakes up in a hospital. A stripper is standing over him, watching. He asks her what she's doing there, and she responds that she was put in a similar situation a while ago and she can help him get revenge, if he comes down to the club later.
Steven does, and watches Ariel lead the men around, before asking her what exactly would be the best way to get revenge on a girl who wanted to spread her wings and fly.
Ariel tells him that he'd probably need to kill her after thoroughly embarassing her. Steven agrees, and begins to study the bible in order to become a priest and a well respected member of the community, under an assumed name. After restoring the clergy to its former glory, he throws a party for the upper class.
Upon entering, all the upper class is forced to hand over their jewelry and coats, telling them that they can pick them up when the party is over. The party goes in full swing, and in walks Liza. She's grown up considerably, wearing makeup and on the arm of the police officer from earlier. Steven runs around the party, making jokes and forcing Liza to her breaking point, where she tries to regain some composure. She takes a cigarette from the side table and smokes it, but it's laced with poison.
Meanwhile, Steven is spiking the punch, making everyone who drinks it trip out, and a long lurid dance number ensues.
After seeing Liza ia dead, Steven picks up a cigarette from the box and heads to the church. He leads the choir in one final song and smokes the cigarette, killing himself.
The narrator comes out and closes the show with a reprise from earlier.
Mal
EDIT: The CD is only 40 minutes long, but that's about how much there is in a typical musical. I really would like to write this and get it produced somewhere with the bands blessing, because that would just be too cool.
It starts out with a narrator singing a song about narrating the following story: It opens with a whore-house, where a young girl has gotten in trouble with the law. Her name is Liza. Anyway, she offers herself up to the police officer there, who drops any charges against her. She also pays her lawyer this way and goes home to her boyfriend, Steve.
They're living together just out of highschool. Liza begins feeling sick and goes to see a doctor, who tells her that she is pregnant. Unwilling to tell Steven the baby isn't his, she forces him to marry her.
Before the ceremony begins, Steven is pacing nervously when he overhears two members of the wedding discussing what a slut Liza is.
Steven decides to marry her anyway, when he over hears the police officer singing a sultry song, asking Liza if it was worth it, who gives in.
Furious, Steven calls off the wedding.
Liza admits to manipulating him, telling him that he's everything a highschool girl could want, but she's grown up and ready to move on. Steven is pissed.
He tries to kill himself and wakes up in a hospital. A stripper is standing over him, watching. He asks her what she's doing there, and she responds that she was put in a similar situation a while ago and she can help him get revenge, if he comes down to the club later.
Steven does, and watches Ariel lead the men around, before asking her what exactly would be the best way to get revenge on a girl who wanted to spread her wings and fly.
Ariel tells him that he'd probably need to kill her after thoroughly embarassing her. Steven agrees, and begins to study the bible in order to become a priest and a well respected member of the community, under an assumed name. After restoring the clergy to its former glory, he throws a party for the upper class.
Upon entering, all the upper class is forced to hand over their jewelry and coats, telling them that they can pick them up when the party is over. The party goes in full swing, and in walks Liza. She's grown up considerably, wearing makeup and on the arm of the police officer from earlier. Steven runs around the party, making jokes and forcing Liza to her breaking point, where she tries to regain some composure. She takes a cigarette from the side table and smokes it, but it's laced with poison.
Meanwhile, Steven is spiking the punch, making everyone who drinks it trip out, and a long lurid dance number ensues.
After seeing Liza ia dead, Steven picks up a cigarette from the box and heads to the church. He leads the choir in one final song and smokes the cigarette, killing himself.
The narrator comes out and closes the show with a reprise from earlier.
Mal
EDIT: The CD is only 40 minutes long, but that's about how much there is in a typical musical. I really would like to write this and get it produced somewhere with the bands blessing, because that would just be too cool.

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