Alright, I've finished the prologue, possibly still in need of a few minor tweaks. Many of the characters in the story are not in this chapter and the few that are aren't described in much detail yet. This is supposed to be this way. Anyways, I know a lot of people have been itching to hear a bit of this, I hope you guys like it...
Prologue
June 19th, 2006
7:32 PM
I don’t know if I’m going to live past tonight. The plan has been set in motion; the world will know what has happened here. I just hope it isn’t too late for the rest of us.
Jason is still lost, probably dead. If I don’t make it, this journal will be the only version of the complete story left.
The alarm just started going off, it has begun. Here’s hoping for good luck…
Dean Kenells
Dean slammed the cover of the navy blue journal shut and shoved it back into the ceramic case he had found only three days before. He lifted the mattress of his queen sized bed and placed the sealed book down. He took a quick glance at the light green journal that hadn’t moved for two days and as he took it in his hands, he let the mattress fall back into place.
Smoke was beginning to seep underneath the door to his room. He could hear voices shouting from both the hallway and the surrounding rooms. The hotel patrons had been alerted early enough; hopefully they would all make it out alive. They had nothing to do with the grisly events that led to this moment.
‘It’s all my fault’, Dean thought to himself as the screams of panic grew louder. If he hadn’t taken that ticket, none of this would’ve happened. Anna had told him that what he was feeling was just survivor’s guilt and in the back of his mind, Dean knew that to be true. Still, knowing this didn’t lessen the pain that he felt.
He threw the tan backpack Anna had bought him on the first day of the trip onto his bed. He opened the smallest compartment on the face of it and dropped the green journal inside. When the journal was safely packed away, he filled the other two compartments with the supplies they would need for the task that lay ahead.
A loud bang on his bedroom door startled Dean, causing him to drop the backpack.
“Dean, we have to hurry!”
It was Allison.
“The fire’s been burning for nearly seven minutes, if we’re going to do this, we have to go now!”
Dean took a quick glance at his clock. It was twenty minutes to eight, Allison was right; if they were going to succeed with this plan, they had to move quickly.
“Alright, I’m coming,” he shouted over the sounds of screams and the low roar of what was most likely the fire. Dean made for the door and reached the handle. He stopped however, before turning it and eyed the now smoky room he had spent the past week in.
Some of the happiest moments of his life had happened in this hotel, some of them right in this very room. Some of the worst memories had also occurred here, a fact Dean wouldn’t soon forget. Even so, it would be hard to walk away from this place forever.
‘Anna’, he whispered, feeling himself well up.
Anna hadn’t even told her parents where she was going. In a sudden change of mind, she had packed her bags and hopped on a plane, leaving only a letter for her parents to find when they arrived home from work that evening. A letter that said she’d left with ‘friends’ and would be back in a week; a letter that had now become the last form of communication Mr. and Mrs. Greye would have with their daughter and they didn’t even know it.
“Dean, now!” Allison’s voice echoed through the door. A loud crashing noise came from somewhere down the hall. The fire was clearly getting worse. Dean wiped a tear from his cheek before opening the door.
The hallway looked like something out of a movie; a thought Dean had been experiencing a lot lately. Fire seemed to be eminating out of every door, giving the hallway a solid orange glow. A piece of the roof had fallen down twenty yards down the hall. That was probably what had caused the noise earlier.
“It’s about time,” Allison harped, giving Dean a menacing look, “what the hell were you doing in there?”
Dean winced as a spark from a nearby blaze caught him in the nape of the neck.
“Nothing,” he responded quietly as he looked back into the smoke filled room, “let’s do this.”
A surprisingly large amount of people were still pouring through the fire soaked hallway as Dean and Allison made their way towards the staircase in the center of the building. Dean guessed that the cave in had blocked off another route of escape, causing people to redirect themselves towards the southern exit.
“Alright, Mike and Dan have done their part,” Allison explained as they weaved through groups of people heading in the opposite direction, “or else we wouldn’t be sweating our asses off in this hallway.”
It was true. They hadn’t been together in the hallway for any more than a couple minutes and Dean’s shirt was already completely drenched in sweat. At best guess, the corridor would have to be well over a hundred and twenty degrees.
“Andrew contacted me,” she continued, kicking a discarded piece of luggage out of her way, “he’s waiting for us at the basement entrance and says there’s little to no security. We should be good to go.”
“And Jason?” Dean inquired without thinking.
Just then a family of larger proportioned people came barreling out of their room. Dean quickly pulled Allison into him to keep her from getting trampled. When the family had passed, she turned to face him, her face showing signs of fatigue and weariness for the first time since they had decided on the plan yesterday.
“He’s down there,” she said shakily, “we’ll-we’ll find him.”
“I’m sorry Allison,” Dean managed to get out before choking up.
For a moment it looked as if Allison was going to break down. The moment passed however, and the stern look Dean had seen for the past twenty four hours returned.
“Dean,” she said, her emerald eyes reflecting the oranges and yellows of the surrounding inferno giving her an almost supernatural look, “this isn’t the time to get all sentimental, we need to focus. Are you with me or not?”
Dean silently reflected on the events of the past week. Allison had appeared so weak. She had been right next to Jason when it had happened and had been a mess for hours. But now, she was the only one who seemed to still be in control of her emotions and her powers. It wouldn’t be untrue to say that Dean had been through a lot in the past week, but this girl, this friendly, good natured girl who looked like she’d break at the drop of a hat had been through hell and back, and was still coming for more; with a furious dedication even. For a split second Allison looked like a shining beacon of hope for Dean. At that moment something told him that it was possible to make it through this. The feeling of hope washed over him, leaving him renewed and oddly content. If Allison was going through this, he was going through it with her.
“I’m with you always Jelly Bean,” He answered, causing a small grin to form on Allison’s face; something he hadn’t seen in more than two days. Those two days however, felt like an eternity now.
“She’d have been happy to see you not giving up,” Allison said as they approached the stairwell. She swung the door open revealing a stiflingly hot, poorly lit flight of stairs.
The blazing hallways cluttered with falling debris and rampant with stampeding people suddenly became a welcoming thought as the two friends made their way down the smoldering stairwell towards the lowest level of the hotel.
Prologue
June 19th, 2006
7:32 PM
I don’t know if I’m going to live past tonight. The plan has been set in motion; the world will know what has happened here. I just hope it isn’t too late for the rest of us.
Jason is still lost, probably dead. If I don’t make it, this journal will be the only version of the complete story left.
The alarm just started going off, it has begun. Here’s hoping for good luck…
Dean Kenells
Dean slammed the cover of the navy blue journal shut and shoved it back into the ceramic case he had found only three days before. He lifted the mattress of his queen sized bed and placed the sealed book down. He took a quick glance at the light green journal that hadn’t moved for two days and as he took it in his hands, he let the mattress fall back into place.
Smoke was beginning to seep underneath the door to his room. He could hear voices shouting from both the hallway and the surrounding rooms. The hotel patrons had been alerted early enough; hopefully they would all make it out alive. They had nothing to do with the grisly events that led to this moment.
‘It’s all my fault’, Dean thought to himself as the screams of panic grew louder. If he hadn’t taken that ticket, none of this would’ve happened. Anna had told him that what he was feeling was just survivor’s guilt and in the back of his mind, Dean knew that to be true. Still, knowing this didn’t lessen the pain that he felt.
He threw the tan backpack Anna had bought him on the first day of the trip onto his bed. He opened the smallest compartment on the face of it and dropped the green journal inside. When the journal was safely packed away, he filled the other two compartments with the supplies they would need for the task that lay ahead.
A loud bang on his bedroom door startled Dean, causing him to drop the backpack.
“Dean, we have to hurry!”
It was Allison.
“The fire’s been burning for nearly seven minutes, if we’re going to do this, we have to go now!”
Dean took a quick glance at his clock. It was twenty minutes to eight, Allison was right; if they were going to succeed with this plan, they had to move quickly.
“Alright, I’m coming,” he shouted over the sounds of screams and the low roar of what was most likely the fire. Dean made for the door and reached the handle. He stopped however, before turning it and eyed the now smoky room he had spent the past week in.
Some of the happiest moments of his life had happened in this hotel, some of them right in this very room. Some of the worst memories had also occurred here, a fact Dean wouldn’t soon forget. Even so, it would be hard to walk away from this place forever.
‘Anna’, he whispered, feeling himself well up.
Anna hadn’t even told her parents where she was going. In a sudden change of mind, she had packed her bags and hopped on a plane, leaving only a letter for her parents to find when they arrived home from work that evening. A letter that said she’d left with ‘friends’ and would be back in a week; a letter that had now become the last form of communication Mr. and Mrs. Greye would have with their daughter and they didn’t even know it.
“Dean, now!” Allison’s voice echoed through the door. A loud crashing noise came from somewhere down the hall. The fire was clearly getting worse. Dean wiped a tear from his cheek before opening the door.
The hallway looked like something out of a movie; a thought Dean had been experiencing a lot lately. Fire seemed to be eminating out of every door, giving the hallway a solid orange glow. A piece of the roof had fallen down twenty yards down the hall. That was probably what had caused the noise earlier.
“It’s about time,” Allison harped, giving Dean a menacing look, “what the hell were you doing in there?”
Dean winced as a spark from a nearby blaze caught him in the nape of the neck.
“Nothing,” he responded quietly as he looked back into the smoke filled room, “let’s do this.”
A surprisingly large amount of people were still pouring through the fire soaked hallway as Dean and Allison made their way towards the staircase in the center of the building. Dean guessed that the cave in had blocked off another route of escape, causing people to redirect themselves towards the southern exit.
“Alright, Mike and Dan have done their part,” Allison explained as they weaved through groups of people heading in the opposite direction, “or else we wouldn’t be sweating our asses off in this hallway.”
It was true. They hadn’t been together in the hallway for any more than a couple minutes and Dean’s shirt was already completely drenched in sweat. At best guess, the corridor would have to be well over a hundred and twenty degrees.
“Andrew contacted me,” she continued, kicking a discarded piece of luggage out of her way, “he’s waiting for us at the basement entrance and says there’s little to no security. We should be good to go.”
“And Jason?” Dean inquired without thinking.
Just then a family of larger proportioned people came barreling out of their room. Dean quickly pulled Allison into him to keep her from getting trampled. When the family had passed, she turned to face him, her face showing signs of fatigue and weariness for the first time since they had decided on the plan yesterday.
“He’s down there,” she said shakily, “we’ll-we’ll find him.”
“I’m sorry Allison,” Dean managed to get out before choking up.
For a moment it looked as if Allison was going to break down. The moment passed however, and the stern look Dean had seen for the past twenty four hours returned.
“Dean,” she said, her emerald eyes reflecting the oranges and yellows of the surrounding inferno giving her an almost supernatural look, “this isn’t the time to get all sentimental, we need to focus. Are you with me or not?”
Dean silently reflected on the events of the past week. Allison had appeared so weak. She had been right next to Jason when it had happened and had been a mess for hours. But now, she was the only one who seemed to still be in control of her emotions and her powers. It wouldn’t be untrue to say that Dean had been through a lot in the past week, but this girl, this friendly, good natured girl who looked like she’d break at the drop of a hat had been through hell and back, and was still coming for more; with a furious dedication even. For a split second Allison looked like a shining beacon of hope for Dean. At that moment something told him that it was possible to make it through this. The feeling of hope washed over him, leaving him renewed and oddly content. If Allison was going through this, he was going through it with her.
“I’m with you always Jelly Bean,” He answered, causing a small grin to form on Allison’s face; something he hadn’t seen in more than two days. Those two days however, felt like an eternity now.
“She’d have been happy to see you not giving up,” Allison said as they approached the stairwell. She swung the door open revealing a stiflingly hot, poorly lit flight of stairs.
The blazing hallways cluttered with falling debris and rampant with stampeding people suddenly became a welcoming thought as the two friends made their way down the smoldering stairwell towards the lowest level of the hotel.


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