I have written a fanfiction, an FFR fanfic. Its about the adventures of Jewpin and all that cool stuff. Tasselfoot even makes a guest appearence. Just to apologise beforehand I mean no disrespect and I think I actually wrote it pretty well and made sure I was not breaking any forum rules. The reason it is about Jewpin is that I do not know any other members well enough to really draw ideas and form personalities. I will write a Chapter 2 if this doesn't get locked.
Chapter 1
A sliver of sunlight cut through the darkness like a knife. Over the course of several hours the beam traveled across the room illuminating its contents. A desk with a computer sitting under an ungainly pile of papers, clothing piled in defensive, somewhat color coordinated clumps in a futile attempt at organization and a bowl of algae that might have once contained a fish or another aquatic animal. At last the light crept upon a bed. Slowly it began to reveal the bed’s contents. A lifeless lump of covers and limbs were strewn across the mattress. Finally the suns rays revealed the owner of those limbs: a shock of sandy hair and a skinny pale face were ignited by the light.
Huhwhatsgoingon? Jewpinthethird thought, his mind not quite up to speed.
“I must have overslept again.” He muttered aloud, sitting up.
Jewpin squinted as he looked for the source that had jerked him into consciousness. Red drapes shown amber as the light peeked through a crack between them.
“Damn that alarm clock!”
In a blur Jewpin threw on some jeans and a polo shirt, grabbed an overstuffed messenger bag, crammed on his glasses sprinkled some fish food into the algae and jogged out of his dorm.
“I hope they haven’t started yet.” he said under his breath.
Scenery flew by him as he picked up speed. Other late students and campus police wandered the college grounds like lost puppies minus the cute. Slamming the door of the Physics building open Jewpin skidded through the hallways. It was a grand experiment, one he had helped design. Using a new theory on space-time mechanics, Jewpin had devised a way to warp the very dimensional fabric that held our universe in place and create a crude, wormhole. While this had no real practical usage, the University agreed to fund the project because it is just the sort of things universities like in their resumes. A sort of “Apply here! We make wormholes!!!” type of thing.
Jewpin screeched to a halt and burst through the door to lab and into a very impatient looking room of official looking spectators and very bored looking students. Muttering an apology Jewpin made his way up to the front of the lab, which was dominated by a very complex looking machine. Several large metal cabinets covered with blinking lights were distributed across the front of the room. Great, numerous, bundles of wires haphazardly made there way from each cabinet to a head tall, hollow, gyroscope-like metal statue.
“Nice of you to show up Mr. Jewpin.” an elderly sarcastic voice called. The voice originated from the infamous perfectionist and head professor of the Physics department Dr. Tasselfoot.
“Sorry Doctor.” Jewpin apologized. “May we begin?”
“Of course, at your leisure Mr. Jewpin.” Tasselfoot replied.
Jewpin grimaced and headed up to the left-most metal cabinet and began to press a complicated series of buttons while Tasselfoot explained to the still perturbed audience what finer scientific processes were going on.
“As the generator warms up large amounts of static electricity will be generated by the copper retaining coils that will then be funneled back into the…”
Jewpin had stopped listening. He knew every detail by heart, he had spent what seemed like his whole life for this moment. Dials lit green in front of him assuring that everything was within acceptable parameters.
The gyroscope began spinning, an electrical blue aura surrounded it. A great whirring noise drowned out thought as the machine sped up to an invisible blur. A blue ball of electrical energy surged at the center.
Finally, Jewpin thought, its going to work. There will be medals and honors and grants and chicks even!
Lights and dials all glowed a comforting green in front of Jewpin. Then something changed.
The whirring of the device changed to a slightly higher pitched whirring and the smallest, inconsequential light on the cabinet changed to red. Then the blue orb began to pulse. Reality rippled around it in a shocking display of colors. That was not supposed to happen.
What’s going - Jewpin could not finish his thought before he lost consciousness.
Green. Jewpin thought. The particular color of green seemed to have a level of importance today. Green. The leaves of a tree appeared overhead and those leaves were, in fact, green.
“Where am I?” Jewpin gasped. He soon came t the realization that he was laying in grass at the base of a tree staring up into the canopy. A voice called out.
“Hello sir, are you alright?”
Jewpin bolted up like a scared animal and looked for the source of the greeting. He saw his adresser and his jaw dropped like a rock.
To be continued...
There, hope you liked it. If you have any suggestions on how to improve my writing style please tell.
Chapter 1
A sliver of sunlight cut through the darkness like a knife. Over the course of several hours the beam traveled across the room illuminating its contents. A desk with a computer sitting under an ungainly pile of papers, clothing piled in defensive, somewhat color coordinated clumps in a futile attempt at organization and a bowl of algae that might have once contained a fish or another aquatic animal. At last the light crept upon a bed. Slowly it began to reveal the bed’s contents. A lifeless lump of covers and limbs were strewn across the mattress. Finally the suns rays revealed the owner of those limbs: a shock of sandy hair and a skinny pale face were ignited by the light.
Huhwhatsgoingon? Jewpinthethird thought, his mind not quite up to speed.
“I must have overslept again.” He muttered aloud, sitting up.
Jewpin squinted as he looked for the source that had jerked him into consciousness. Red drapes shown amber as the light peeked through a crack between them.
“Damn that alarm clock!”
In a blur Jewpin threw on some jeans and a polo shirt, grabbed an overstuffed messenger bag, crammed on his glasses sprinkled some fish food into the algae and jogged out of his dorm.
“I hope they haven’t started yet.” he said under his breath.
Scenery flew by him as he picked up speed. Other late students and campus police wandered the college grounds like lost puppies minus the cute. Slamming the door of the Physics building open Jewpin skidded through the hallways. It was a grand experiment, one he had helped design. Using a new theory on space-time mechanics, Jewpin had devised a way to warp the very dimensional fabric that held our universe in place and create a crude, wormhole. While this had no real practical usage, the University agreed to fund the project because it is just the sort of things universities like in their resumes. A sort of “Apply here! We make wormholes!!!” type of thing.
Jewpin screeched to a halt and burst through the door to lab and into a very impatient looking room of official looking spectators and very bored looking students. Muttering an apology Jewpin made his way up to the front of the lab, which was dominated by a very complex looking machine. Several large metal cabinets covered with blinking lights were distributed across the front of the room. Great, numerous, bundles of wires haphazardly made there way from each cabinet to a head tall, hollow, gyroscope-like metal statue.
“Nice of you to show up Mr. Jewpin.” an elderly sarcastic voice called. The voice originated from the infamous perfectionist and head professor of the Physics department Dr. Tasselfoot.
“Sorry Doctor.” Jewpin apologized. “May we begin?”
“Of course, at your leisure Mr. Jewpin.” Tasselfoot replied.
Jewpin grimaced and headed up to the left-most metal cabinet and began to press a complicated series of buttons while Tasselfoot explained to the still perturbed audience what finer scientific processes were going on.
“As the generator warms up large amounts of static electricity will be generated by the copper retaining coils that will then be funneled back into the…”
Jewpin had stopped listening. He knew every detail by heart, he had spent what seemed like his whole life for this moment. Dials lit green in front of him assuring that everything was within acceptable parameters.
The gyroscope began spinning, an electrical blue aura surrounded it. A great whirring noise drowned out thought as the machine sped up to an invisible blur. A blue ball of electrical energy surged at the center.
Finally, Jewpin thought, its going to work. There will be medals and honors and grants and chicks even!
Lights and dials all glowed a comforting green in front of Jewpin. Then something changed.
The whirring of the device changed to a slightly higher pitched whirring and the smallest, inconsequential light on the cabinet changed to red. Then the blue orb began to pulse. Reality rippled around it in a shocking display of colors. That was not supposed to happen.
What’s going - Jewpin could not finish his thought before he lost consciousness.
Green. Jewpin thought. The particular color of green seemed to have a level of importance today. Green. The leaves of a tree appeared overhead and those leaves were, in fact, green.
“Where am I?” Jewpin gasped. He soon came t the realization that he was laying in grass at the base of a tree staring up into the canopy. A voice called out.
“Hello sir, are you alright?”
Jewpin bolted up like a scared animal and looked for the source of the greeting. He saw his adresser and his jaw dropped like a rock.
To be continued...
There, hope you liked it. If you have any suggestions on how to improve my writing style please tell.
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