Look ma, I made a song!

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  • MonkeyFoo
    FFR Veteran
    • Sep 2004
    • 397
    #1

    Look ma, I made a song!

    Following Tank's example, I put it up on soundclick under the band name Homunculus Diadem: http://www.soundclick.com/homunculusdiadem

    I actually filled out all of the fields for song description, so look there for general description of the song.

    I'm really looking for critique of my patterns here, and how they work together; I know that it isn't organized particularly well. I plan to use feedback from here, if you give me any, to help compose the elements I used here into an actual song.

    PS. I don't know why it has that extra silence at the end. FL put it in there, and I was too lazy to edit it out with something else.
    How has it been 15 years
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    • sleeplessdragn
      ~Bang that beat Harder~
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jan 2004
      • 2321
      #2
      RE: Look ma, I made a song!

      Well the first thing I said to myself when I heard this was, "turn down the resonance on your bells." The last thing that I thought was, "I feel that a more prominent melody should have been introduced at some point." And since my teachers always say, "all that matters is what the grader is going to think first and last," I'll leave you with that.

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        • MonkeyFoo
          FFR Veteran
          • Sep 2004
          • 397
          #3
          RE: Look ma, I made a song!

          Thanks. Now to think of how to make a more prominent melody...

          And maybe if I turn off the flanger, the resonance problem you speak of will go away.
          How has it been 15 years

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            • zajac
              aka uAnimals
              FFR Music Producer
              • Aug 2003
              • 4050
              #4
              RE: Look ma, I made a song!

              So this is what I think... The song is short... And being short... The intro was way too long to get up to all the 'action'... And then when you get to the action... The song is over... That and the beat that's introduced at :45 or so kinda bugs me haha... And I like the guitar sounding synth that you added... I could easily see this song going in a drum 'n bass direction if you wanted it to...

              Not a bad song... But not the greatest... Keep up the good work though
              Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
              We Rate You: Cool Motherfucer. 9/10

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