New Songs from Dj Renewman

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  • Chromer
    Hookers and Blow
    • Jul 2003
    • 4981
    #1

    New Songs from Dj Renewman

    Yes people this is Dj Renewman (Chromer), after a long absense since Just Love Me. That song didn't exactly do too well. But fear not! I have more horribly made songs!

    My Body- Melodic Vocal House song.

    Night's Journey Into Dawn (Part 1)- Drum and Bass (i think) type song.

    Psalm 30: Verse 5- Go read it in the Bible and listen to the song. That's all I can say.

    So I want your honest opinion people. Please don't make retarded comments.

    Dj Renewman – House & Trance Music | Free MP3 Downloads | 10+ Songs
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=311020
    Discover Dj Renewman, an independent electronica artist on SoundClick. Over 10 original tracks and 4.6K streams on SoundClick.
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    • Jihnsius
      FFR Music Producers
      FFR Music Producer
      • Aug 2004
      • 97
      #2
      RE: New Songs from Dj Renewman

      RETARDED COMMENT #1 lololololoolllol

      But on a more serious note:

      The beginning melody is beautiful.
      The synth that brings in the foreground melody sounds off, though, for reasons that are beyond me. Sounds like it's offkey on a few notes, too.
      The pads are really nice, but I think you should touch up on the attack/delay, so that they fade into eachother more, rather than starting/ending abruptly.
      Percussion is really basic. Using default samples? 3:00 and there's absolutely no progression yet. Just those intial pads. Try adding more percussion in every few bars to build more climax. I'd also suggest bringing in a few new synths. Snare rushes/crashes to add to the climax, too.
      Originally posted by Aerogroove
      you like my space ship cargo bay door sound solo, jihn?

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        • Chromer
          Hookers and Blow
          • Jul 2003
          • 4981
          #3
          RE: New Songs from Dj Renewman

          Actually Jihnsius, the abrupt start/stop is my style. I'm known for that. I appreciate the comments but I don't know exactly what song you're talking about. ROFL I did catch the Stillness comment though. Thanks.

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