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  • sleeplessdragn
    ~Bang that beat Harder~
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Jan 2004
    • 2321

    #1

    AsB Remix

    Hey guys, I've just pretty recently got back into the FL and decided to remix an old favorite of mine.

    http://sdcc21.ucsd.edu/~jyu/AsB%20(Phoenix%20Phire)%20-%20sleeplessdragn.mp3

    ^(Original Mix)^

    Comments and critiques are welcomed, as always. Hope you enjoy my take on this interesting piece.

    EDIT: http://sdcc21.ucsd.edu/~jyu/AsB%20(Phoenix%20Phire)%20-%20sleeplessdragn.mp3

    ^(Final Release)^
  • BCLR
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2005
    • 95

    #2
    Nice song! I love it, just downloading right now, keep up the nice work!

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    • dancingmaniac3
      FFR Player
      • Nov 2003
      • 1873

      #3
      Eh..song is ok...The melody needs to be more...OUT.. like, more loud. and it kinda just repeats over n over which isnt bad but eh...lol..nice tho.

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      • sleeplessdragn
        ~Bang that beat Harder~
        FFR Simfile Author
        FFR Music Producer
        • Jan 2004
        • 2321

        #4
        Thanks! I was planning on submitting this into FFR. I'm glad that you guys liked it.

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        • BCLR
          FFR Player
          • Feb 2005
          • 95

          #5
          I just burnt it onto a CD along with some other stuff, I just can't get enough of it, it kicks ass! Thnaks for making it.

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          • Afrobean
            Admiral in the Red Army
            • Dec 2003
            • 13262

            #6
            Honestly, I liked the original better. No offense, I just think it handled the melody better.

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            • deltro300111
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2003
              • 1014

              #7
              AsB is old...

              Edit: It's ok... I wish you would keep the melody, you changed the notes up a bit, the rest is ok, but having heard the original song, I prefer the original melody over your remade one.

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              • jewpinthethird
                (The Fat's Sabobah)
                FFR Music Producer
                • Nov 2002
                • 11711

                #8
                I think this remix blows loads all over the original. I totally dig it. Good show.

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                • Varia
                  FFR Player
                  • Jul 2003
                  • 1713

                  #9
                  I like the original better.

                  They both sound kind of cheesy, but this one sounds more cheesy. Mostly because it sounds like it was made in FL.
                  GB CHALLENGE IS HOMOSEXUAL

                  ARE YOU HOMOSEXUAL?


                  I THINK SO

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                  • sleeplessdragn
                    ~Bang that beat Harder~
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    FFR Music Producer
                    • Jan 2004
                    • 2321

                    #10
                    I know that, as with all remixes, a bias forms around the original melody and such. I've allowed some people to listen to both versions who have never heard the original first, and have had different opinions. I am happy though that I've gotten feedback, it's more than what I expected, and I appreciate it much. Though I am still in the process of smoothing things out, all I ask is that you look at this remix as a standalone piece, instead of a comparison between the original. I'm humbled to even think that I could out do Jewpin, but I did give my best efforts into putting my own style into his work.

                    Again, I really do appreciate all the feedback, but I think I'm just a little bit annoyed at a general notion that all remixes need to be compared to the original. And of course, I am always trying to perfect and re-perfect pieces that I produce; and that includes making songs sound less FL : P.

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                    • Starshot
                      /DJS\
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Dec 2004
                      • 1794

                      #11
                      For Fruity Loops, that is excellent. A supurb hard trance mix of the tune.

                      The only problem I see is that in the main syth, it sometimes sounds flat.

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                      • sleeplessdragn
                        ~Bang that beat Harder~
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        FFR Music Producer
                        • Jan 2004
                        • 2321

                        #12
                        Alright, well I've been working on this still, a little bit each day, and I'll be posting a newer version soon. I've added what I feel is a stronger bassline to fill up the spectrum a bit more, along with a couple of minor effects and leevl changes. Hopefully it will have a better feel and less of a cheesy tone.

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                        • B3NJ1
                          FFR Player
                          • Mar 2005
                          • 266

                          #13
                          I was starting to get a little tired of the original. Very nice work. Excellent remix. One thing though, around 1:33, I don't like how you did that part in 3 8th notes with a rest inbetween. That could just be me though.

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                          • sleeplessdragn
                            ~Bang that beat Harder~
                            FFR Simfile Author
                            FFR Music Producer
                            • Jan 2004
                            • 2321

                            #14
                            Alritey, I got around to posting up the mix with the corrections and additions and all that jazz. I added a a couple of kick variations for spice, and a few other things.

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