Wish I Had an Angel

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  • Chadith
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2005
    • 10
    #1

    Wish I Had an Angel

    This is my first simfile to be made, but I put alot of work into it and I thought it came out pretty well. The song is Wish I Had an Angel by Nightwish and it rocks. My friend Alex made the banner and the background to it and they're awesome looking in my opinion.

    I'd appreciate any feedback whether positive or negative. Thanks!


    http://bemanistyle.com/sims/simfile.php?id=15125


    Cmon...just click it...it won\'t bite.
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    • -Austin-
      FFR Player
      • Jul 2005
      • 16
      #2
      RE: Wish I Had an Angel

      It's a pretty good file. It remains on beat, but the ending is a little chaotic.

      Overall it's pretty good, I recommend it.

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        • drummerlsu
          Geaux Tigers
          • Apr 2004
          • 105
          #3
          The steps aren't bad. It's a shame the graphic/title is cut off at the top, maybe you could fix that?

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            • Chadith
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2005
              • 10
              #4
              Yeah I'm gonna have my friend fix that, we didn't realize till after that it was being covered up..


              Cmon...just click it...it won\'t bite.

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                • Chadith
                  FFR Player
                  • Jul 2005
                  • 10
                  #5
                  Bump...>_>...

                  I'd really like some more feedback on my simfile...and appreciate if some of you would try it and tell me how it is. I'm not sure what's good about it or what's wrong with and what I could improve upon...


                  Cmon...just click it...it won\'t bite.

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                    • Bahamut-X
                      FFR Player
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Nov 2004
                      • 3399
                      #6
                      Hmm, not bad. It's perfectly onsync, and the patterns in this sim were pretty fun. Couple things though. Wtf is up with the 24th thing in the beginning? It goes to absolutely nothing. It's funny how you complain about streams going to nothing in my sim but then make this thing which is 100 times more random. Also, the doubles within the streams are unecessary unless you are going to make multiple difficulties. It's either straight streams, or doubles in streams, people don't like it when you mix it (people like indexers wouldn't enjoy this). You don't have to make more than 1 difficulty, it's just a good idea to do it. Other than that, good patterns, fun streams, overall it was a quality sim. 8.5/10

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                        • Chadith
                          FFR Player
                          • Jul 2005
                          • 10
                          #7
                          The 24th's go with something if you listen but maybe they were uneeded. Perhaps you were right about the doubles too but they did go along with the singer. I thought the last part needed them cause it's the biggest part of the song to me. I probably will end up making a oni difficulty for the doubles and make the heavy straight streams as you said. And I wasn't really complaining about your simfile..I was just saying..>_>

                          Thanks for the feedback ^_^


                          Cmon...just click it...it won\'t bite.

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