Need some suggestions on ideas

**g0ldenSun11** · 02-12-2005, 04:18 PM

Warmth...instantley copied to iPod. (Have yet ot listen to the other one.)

Well, it sounds like a pretty full-fledged song to me, really awesome beat to it. I just don't like the ending to much, I think you could put something else in that part.

*OFFTOPIC*: I don't know if it's just my internet but soundclick has been acting real funky lately and going to errors such as "site can not be found", anyone else been having this problem?

**Pooping_Panda** · 02-12-2005, 08:17 PM

I actually like them both, but if you were to continue one of them i would continue with Landscape, i like the synth it has.

**sleeplessdragn** · 02-14-2005, 12:09 AM

So, is this the product of that snazzy new, ExPeNsIvE, blinged out hardware that you purchased? I must say that it is very good stuff. Warmth reminds me of some Cynic Project stuff, and I'm a big fan of Cynic Project, but I would definitely have to say that Landscape is some crazy good stuff. I agree with panda on this one, that synth is very addictive.

I would bring in some strong pads as melodies for Landscape, or a really smooth sounding flute-ish sample. Something nice and drawn out, with a compliment of soft closed hats and whatnot.

**Omeganitros** · 02-14-2005, 10:29 AM

Warmth: Right around 2:00, it could use a really sweet chorus. Just a short and really cool melody that involves most of the instruments right before the breakdown. And then you could come right back to the chorus after the breakdown. And as for an ending to the song goes, that's easy. End it the same way you began it.

**slimshdy425** · 02-21-2005, 07:37 AM

Originally posted by g0ldenSun11

*OFFTOPIC*: I don't know if it's just my internet but soundclick has been acting real funky lately and going to errors such as "site can not be found", anyone else been having this problem?

I can't get to your soundclick page Shox, it says its down.

Need some suggestions on ideas

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