My first attempt at a song.

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  • SeekerDarksteel
    FFR Player
    • Oct 2003
    • 2
    #1

    My first attempt at a song.

    Yeah, this is my first song so I'm sure you can find plenty wrong with it. I'm trying to get feedback on it so don't hesitate to tell me if you don't like it.

    The metroid-esque theme to the strings and bass was unintentional, btw. It started off on the bass and didnt sound like metroid at all, but moving it to the strings really brought it out.

    Linkey.
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    • DJSBX
      FFR Music Producers
      FFR Music Producer
      • Oct 2003
      • 514
      #2
      RE: My first attempt at a song.

      hmm well first of all, what program did you use? how long have you been using it?

      over all it wasnt bad. I felt it was wayyyyy wayyyy to repetitive. there was like just that one part in the middle that was different. Add in to the rest, and it would sound fuller.


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        • SeekerDarksteel
          FFR Player
          • Oct 2003
          • 2
          #3
          I used fruity loops. I just started using it about 5 or 6 days ago.

          I know it was somewhat repetitive, the problem was listening to the song 18 million times in 3 days I ceased being able to judge just how repetitive it was. One thing I didnt want to work on is the guitar sounds for the very last part. I was re-using the guitar sounds from the middle part because I just couldn't seem to come up with anything new for the end. I could probably also stand to cut out some of the very beginning and very end patterns.

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