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  • flypie743
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2004
    • 3210
    #1

    Circus Beat

    New song made in FL by me:

    http://members.lycos.co.uk/flypie743/Circus%20Beat.mp3


    EDIT: because lycos is being stupid, you have to copy and paste the link into a new browser window to hear it.

    IF YOU ARE THE BOMB YOU WILL CLICK THIS and if you dont, you suck.
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    • Afrobean
      Admiral in the Red Army
      • Dec 2003
      • 13262
      #2
      seriously, does anyone read these?

      You're always saying how you don't want your songs to be too crowded, but this one seems great. The vibraslap is a little overused, though. I don't know what it is about it though, but this just seems really weird. I do like it though. I just suggest taking out a lot of the vibraslaps. Also, I am seeing progress in this when compared to your previous works. So, to reiterate, good job.

      wow... my thoughts usually flow a lot better than this...

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        • flypie743
          FFR Player
          • Jun 2004
          • 3210
          #3
          RE: seriously, does anyone read these?

          You're always saying how you don't want your songs to be too crowded, but this one seems great.
          Yeah, well I said cluttered =/...meaning like I didnt want it all jumbled up, like just putting in notes weirdly.

          IF YOU ARE THE BOMB YOU WILL CLICK THIS and if you dont, you suck.

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            • flypie743
              FFR Player
              • Jun 2004
              • 3210
              #4
              RE: seriously, does anyone read these?

              bump

              IF YOU ARE THE BOMB YOU WILL CLICK THIS and if you dont, you suck.

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                • evilbutterfly
                  FFR Player
                  • Apr 2003
                  • 5784
                  #5
                  RE: seriously, does anyone read these?

                  Everything Afro said + longer + more variance throughout the song + few cymbols

                  It might also help to increase the volume on whatever the melody is. Mostly, this song seems to just repeat the same stuff over and over. Vary it up a little.

                  And life Afro said, you're getting better. You still have plenty of room for improvement, though.
                  So I've gone completely slack-ass and haven't done any work on creating games. =(

                  In less-depressing news, I got a job for an online business (which sells non-electronic games, of all things!) which has taught me a lot about marketing online and all that jazz.

                  So now I'm on Twitter @NoahWright.
                  And I write the blog for their website.

                  Plus I do cool programming in-house that you'll never see. =O

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