porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

LMAO Dude I will literally step EVERY anime song I know for this... Sorry about my pack D: I've been really busy but I'll drop it to collab and help with yours (I learned I'm not very good at heading packs because I have the attention span of a squirrel)

PORKYGOD ANIME PACK

Songs I'll step
Mirai Nikki OP
Freezing ED
Charlotte OP
Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid OP
High School DXD Born OP
Monster Musume OP
Fate Stay/Night OP (YES I KNOW REBIRTH STEPPED IT BUT IT'S 2017 NOW TIME FOR A REVAMP!)

EDIT: I'll help with da judging if you want

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Np my dude, tbh I did feel pretty cuck'd but this is pretty hype to hear.
I'll continue sending my stuff over to you as I finish it along with other submissions if I ever do get any.

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Sent in Freezing ED

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Great, will look into it tmrw along with
Adrenaline!! - Eromanga Sensei ED [Dump]

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Did you look at Freezing ED?

Btw I'm almost done Mirai Nikki OP.

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Sorry was abit late

Adrenaline!!

- This plays extremely well, I was worried about some parts but turned out fine. Also there were some very cool patterns I gotta take note of especially in the first half.
Other than that as I said the rest plays real nice even with some poly rythyms, its cool u can pull that off.
On that note, theres two things Id like to address.

One: the very beginning @4.931
It kinda feels lacking here, I'd like to see the jumps that were following the melody in that stream all the way even in the 24th stream.


@63.140
theres like one crash you didnt add Im guessing because its not necessarily as loud as the other ones but I'd like to see a jump here some how without making it too hard. You might have to rearrange the 16th jumpjacks you have before it or the 32nd stream below.

Other than that looks good to me as far as playing it on 0.9x might find some more stuff as I keep playing, otherwise nice work.

Also, I think I can make a non-dump chart. But if you were able to make it that helps.

- Needs non-Dump chart




Kimi wo Mamoritai

Overall the chart plays smoothly well, however can use quite a few polishing. It seems like you are going back and forth with what you are trying to layer which comes out to be and feel very inconsistent.

@10.380 - Jump here going to nothing. It could be following the echo but I don't advise you layer the echo the same way you are layering the main vocal. Remove it.

@15.630 - Although this is fun to play its not what I would personally like to see, or to be blunt, how I would chart this section. The measure where this starts (14.344), there is a stronger hi-hat sound that kicks in offering some interesting stuff. Right here there is a trill going on tht could also be stepped as a two note jacks. But you didnt really follow this entirely so this note is totally optional.

@19.702 - Not necessarily suppose to be jumps here but I like what you did here.

@22.059 - Heres where things start getting really fishy. The way you layer identical phrases changes within the measures. here you have the bassline layered as hands. But each time this phrase reoccurs you have it stepped in a different way.

Not a fan of mini freezes overlapping closer than 12ths. Not to mention, it looks very inconsistent with what you are following with them. Either take them all off or do what you did @26.13 / 26.344 and just keep the ones at the end of a stream segment.

Try to revisit 22-28 with a concert layering of what you want to follow/ I could go over in more detail on discord.

@28.202 - missing an opportunity of a vocal hitting on the 24th right here. It seems tho you purposely didnt want to chart it.

Also here again, mini freezes are confusing as to what they are following. Part of me wants to say bassline but then again there are other parts that I thought should have a mini freeze dont have it.

@28.702 - missing jump following the vocal + bassline.

@29.023 - missing vocal note. I think you snapped at on the following 8th note which needs to be changed as a single note among adding this note.

@29.237 - missing jump following the vocal + bassline.

@31.594 - the vocal note I mentioned earlier that hits on the 24th applies to here too.

@32.487 - I don't know what these 12th jumps are going to. The vocal note snaps on the 16th just as every other did.

@34.702 - missing jump following bassline + vocal.

@35.773 - Patterning changes again and now you introduce jumpjacks which I actually would love to see a version where you use this more consistently. But since the majority of the chart are offsetted jumps it would require a overhaul to consider stepping this way, so unfortunately, change this.

@36.523 - Missing vocal

@39.952 - Jump on this 16th is not warranted.

@41.773 - The usage of mini jacks and layering of kicks are inconsistent please revisit this section.

@56.023 - This 16th and the one after I believe are followign the vocal but they arn't real vocal notes. It is interesting that you caught on to it and I dig it but this whole part doesnt warrant to be patterned as a one hand trill. loosen up the pattern here like how you did with rest of the following mini-jumpstreams. Or You could be a rebel and do the complete opposite and make them all trills following the PR.

@64.594 - missing hi-hat

@68.130 - Change this note to a 3 or a 4. Just because of this single note you created a long ass anchor that isnt warranted.

@69.202~82.916 - Inconsistent usage of hands and jumps aswell as some missing notes in this section please revisit.

@83.130 - change to single note wrong layer.


Didn't really go in to everything but those were the key things. Everything else were nested within these and if it wasnt clear I can go over it if you don't find it.

- Needs fixes

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Hey I have anime files I've made for the pack I'm work on including the evangelion op, Colors (Code Geass op1), Masayume Chasing, TRY UNITE!, My Dearest, and The Everlasting Guilty Crown. If you really want one of those I wouldn't mind also releasing something first for this pack.

Somebody pls chart some more fairy tail/bleach/pokemon openings!
And the Manyuu Hikenchou opening
And the second Shaman King opening
And the DNAngel opening
And the Outlaw Star opening
And some well charted classy Legend of the Galatic Heroes openings
No? Nobody? Okay.

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]


Any FLOW song is already PogChamp to me so looking forward to what you got!
'' If you really want one of those '', so yea if you're literally letting me only choose one then I choose this. edit: colors

Not sure which type of files you're making but as far as My Dearest and The Everlasting Guilty Crown, there is already a non dump in OD8/9 that Im pretty satisfied with. Attang also dumped the shit out of them but there is always room for more dumps.

I might dump Pokemons japanese themes but not for this pack.
I also have a couple bleach's in mind but also not for this pack and not dumps.

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Sent in fixes for Kimi wo Mamoritai

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Submitted a Colors file.

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Idk when Porky will mention this but I am also judging for this pack . dumps included... I'm making a learning curve for today's shit

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

will look into these two tmrw when im off work! Thanx a bunch~

And yes, ShadowGod has offered me to judge. Thank my dude

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

Here are notes, had them on discord but for the record will post here~

Colors
The problem with this style is that it lacks variation of patterns when its stepped this heavily.
I understand that this is more of a jack stamina practice. However, it goes bland especially when the chorus and verses are stepped nearly the same. There also wasn't a defined layering structure within phrases and alot of things felt random in terms of layering and patterning. Such as vocals not being consistently layered and alot of the 16ths layering felt very arbitrarily charted as singles/doubles. 37.643 and a couple measures onward is a good example of what im talking about.

66.319-72.937
was the funnest part in the file in terms of how relavent the patterns followed the song. Despite it being the easiest part it is also the most unique part of the file which helps it stand out alot.

Conclusion, It was hard to say its enjoyable mainly because of how bland it came out to be with the lack of unique layering/patterns and arbitrary usage of doubles/triples.
A good example Id like to see from a file of this nature would be ''KiraiNoWaKeLychee'' from ''Jackin' It To Anime OPs Pack 1''


- Needs Fix before accepting


Kimi wo Mamoritai V2

ShadowGod - Last Monday at 1:35 AM
The mini freezes are actually going to the synth so that's why they overlap, would you prefer them smaller so they're not really noticed?
This was optional because I dont want to tell you to completely not step it since u had most of them down. Playing through the edit right now and u added the ones i found missing which is great

36.523- I've listened to this song more times than I can count and I don't see or hear a vocal at this exact section
She is saying
Kimidake ni aru
Where ''ru'' hits on the 16th right here.

39.951- Jump is part of the vocals
gotcha



@23.880 this 16th has the kick percussion(the same one as the ones in 25.059) layered with the synth. I personally think this is a perfect opportunity to use a jumpjack or at least have it [12]

@22.166 if this is following the tick sound, shouldnt there be one @22.916?
I understand why it wasnt stepped but it technically isnt consistent. Your call.
But then starting from @24.630 you change what ticks you follow again

@24.845 synth + jump

@25.585 In the same exact phrase before this(22.059), you stepped the tick that goes here. Although, I would also love to see the 4th right before this stepped as a jump I can totally understand why you choose not to and its a hard say for a solution.
- Mini freezes still needs to be added here.

@26.559 percussion + synth jump layer to this and the following 16th. Just like how you did at 23.10

@28.202 This is optional but going to elaborate on what is goign on here.
Basically she is saying, Hitoribotchi which is broken up to
Hi to ri bot chi, where they snap at the following notes,
24th 8th 16th 4th 8th

You ignore the ''hi'' part of this segment which falls on a 24th

Which is understandable. But note this same phrase occurs again and sung the same way but you have a jump layer. Will mention further into notes.

@29.023 Still missing the note I mentioned. Here she is saying Fuan, where the ''an'' is missed tht hits on the 16th here.

@31.457 Here is what I was talking about. This is where she sings that delayed note that hits on the 24th.

@32.452 Vocal falls on the 16th here but you have it snapped as a jump on the 8th followed by this

@34.702 Jump here meyb?

@40.380 Missing vocal jump here

She says Koete, which is
Ko e te
8th 16th 4th

Second half is SOOO much better. I love it. I can follow along what is going on alot more better now.
It is still missing the long anchor fix i was talking about and would appreciate it fixed.
https://imgur.com/AAei7al
Separate the anchor on 2 between the vocal and the snare roll. moving the 8th single note right after the [12] following the vocal will help this play alot better differentiating the vocal anchor and the snare roll.

Needs Fix before accepting

Re: porkypink's Anime Pack I [open submission]

How Do I download the pack? Im new and dont know where to find the pack data