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  • rzr
    TWG Veteran
    • Oct 2007
    • 7608

    #1

    Good Die Young

    A lot of you probably don't know me or anything about this - but I've been writing music for about 15 years. You don't just find FFR not being a musician or a fan somehow!
    About 6 years ago I got into rap, I'm much more comfortable with it as a flow in general compared to my rock songs that feel like more poetry. Though I do play drums and guitar, my heart is in the vocals. So, it's been many months since I've "spit" something, or written a new song. I was sitting here listening to music earlier and just decided BAM open notepad and start typing. No joke, 4 minutes later I looked up and this is what I had. It's not perfect. But I'm curious the message you guys take from it - I think there's a lot more feelings behind it than I'd care to admit.


    good die young
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    you know that life gets frustrating
    leaves you just with hating
    nothin left to say so get fucked up and wasted
    you never really know what the stakes is
    they must be too high, you know you aint fly
    and even if you was you'd drop out of the sky
    so put down the wings kid, you aint meant for the air
    i know you're scared, but keep it inside, no one wants to hear
    and I know you must ask yourself why do you even try
    but hey maybe it aint your fault - maybe you're not the guy
    things aren't even worth it

    you know you don't deserve it
    shit this life aint perfect
    and everyone drops bombs on you it makes you kinda nervous
    so you walkin on some egg shells
    feeling caught under a spell
    and even though you never fell
    you still can't get back up

    they said only the good die young
    so why am I still here?
    I thought I did good deeds
    I thought I beat the fear
    I guess it comes back creepin
    and creepin's never fast
    I thought that I was good
    but only the bad guys last

    aint no rest for the wicked
    closin them eyes is restricted
    you talk but no one listens
    now you gettin the mission?
    no one's catching what you're pitching
    they're just laughing at your fiction
    no plans come to fruition
    might as well go back to the kitchen

    when the wick on the candle burns it's last spark
    makes you wonder why'd you even start
    coulda enjoyed it sitting on a shelf
    now you turned it into someone else
    and candle wax aint never the same
    when you kiss its lips with just the smallest flame
    it's easy to go from wild to tame
    if you do it in someone else's name

    one more time around might get it right
    keep trying and trying to reignite
    the spark is gone, the candle is dead
    but the thoughts linger on at the top of your head
    the wax drips down and it soaks the floor
    and you still don't know why.. why you want some more

    Originally posted by darkshark
    Everyone sucks at this game. The second you think you're good is the second you stop trying to get better.
    Originally posted by aperson
    i had a mri the other day it was the best song i heard in years

    Originally posted by Sprite-
    More of a joke than the time I deleted all the credits on the site.
    Originally posted by MinaciousGrace
    yeah my goldfish think im a riot they do this thing where they turn upside down and float to the top of the tank

    i guess their alcohol tolerance isnt as high as mine
  • botchi246
    Keepin it Real since '05
    • Mar 2005
    • 608

    #2
    Re: Good Die Young

    I like it, tells a good message. Personally, music that has a good message behind a weak beat, not saying this has a weak beat btw, always is better than music with a dumb message, like fuck bitches get money, on a strong beat, will always win out. That sentence is convoluted, but work with me.

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    • rzr
      TWG Veteran
      • Oct 2007
      • 7608

      #3
      Re: Good Die Young

      Thank you, AJ!
      I really enjoyed where the song ended up bringing me, the whole concept of the candle being more beautiful before it's lit.
      And you're right - I used to put on beats and write to the beats so there was a clear flow. But I don't have any beat makers anymore, actually I really REALLY need someone who can help with that.

      Originally posted by darkshark
      Everyone sucks at this game. The second you think you're good is the second you stop trying to get better.
      Originally posted by aperson
      i had a mri the other day it was the best song i heard in years

      Originally posted by Sprite-
      More of a joke than the time I deleted all the credits on the site.
      Originally posted by MinaciousGrace
      yeah my goldfish think im a riot they do this thing where they turn upside down and float to the top of the tank

      i guess their alcohol tolerance isnt as high as mine

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      • botchi246
        Keepin it Real since '05
        • Mar 2005
        • 608

        #4
        Re: Good Die Young

        lol i make beats

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