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  • midnghtraver
    Icarus Moth
    FFR Music Producer
    • Jan 2006
    • 2064

    #1

    wordstrament

    https://soundcloud.com/icarusmoth/smewth/s-A7pO7

    I'll give someone a bunch of credits if they can create a cool hook for this song. You don't have to sing it, just write some shit down.

    Was thinking of posting this in the literature thread but they don't like me there.
  • Zageron
    Zageron E. Tazaterra
    FFR Administrator
    • Apr 2007
    • 6592

    #2
    Re: wordstrament

    Funky chillout. Reminiscent of Tunguska.

    Bass is a little overbearing, it overwrites the other instruments slightly. Is it supposed to be a loop or continue into another song? Otherwise needs an ending, like a riff falloff or something.

    Very chill tune.

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