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  • Zaevod
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2013
    • 385
    #1

    Uncontainable

    Song I started several months ago but only tried to finish now.
    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/uncontainable
    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse
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    • drizzleRomanceGirl
      It's okay to be yourself.
      • Oct 2012
      • 2963
      #2
      Re: Uncontainable

      I love how the song sounds overall. I feel like most of the song has a more consistent rhythm in comparison to the beginning piano melody, so it seems like the beginning rhythm doesn't follow the rest of the song. The piano melody has more complex rhythms such as plenty of offbeats and grace notes, while the rest of the song mostly has notes on the beat. I also think that the piano melody at the beginning should keep the same flow throughout each bar. At the end of every bar in the beginning of the song, the melody dies out in the last bar and comes back in the next bar, and it doesn't flow well in my opinion.
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        • Zaevod
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2013
          • 385
          #3
          Re: Uncontainable

          I guess I meant the beginning to be more "disjointed" than the rest.
          https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse

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            • StoneMcKnuckle
              FFR Player
              • May 2011
              • 790
              #4
              Re: Uncontainable

              this is pretty good. I like the piano shit at the start a lot. I don't like how the guitar sounds but I know that shit is pretty difficult to wrestle with hehe

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                • Zaevod
                  FFR Player
                  • Apr 2013
                  • 385
                  #5
                  Re: Uncontainable

                  Originally posted by StoneMcKnuckle
                  this is pretty good. I like the piano shit at the start a lot. I don't like how the guitar sounds but I know that shit is pretty difficult to wrestle with hehe
                  I was experimenting with some effects on Guitar Rig 5 and I kinda liked that timbre, so I kept it. I'm not 100% satisfied, though.
                  https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse

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