Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

Now we're talking

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Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

oh yes

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

Played it. Pretty fun. Barely passed though.

The 12th minijacks don't really feel right to me and some of the sections feel a little unpolished but overall its still neat.

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

I approve

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

lol i typo'ed the thread title, the song is Anata Ga Mawaru, and I put Wamaru ffffffffff

Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k

what parts felt unpolished o:

Re: Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k

Some of the 12th minijacks feel a bit random. I can kind of get a feel for what you were going for but idk they just didn't feel quite right. Especially prevelant in the first 20ish seconds of the song and right at the end.

37.111s - These 16ths arent accurate
44.595s - these two beats feel awkward and are hard to discern
55.574s - The 24th and 12th in the couple beats after this are really hard to feel when playing, if that makes sense. I think they're a bit too muddy to hear the rythms clearly. Same thing happens a few beats later.
88.125s - The section starting here it is kind of hard to discern when the vocal lands on an 8th or a 12th but it plays really well so not a big deal.
111.035s - 12ths here feel like they should be jumps but eh, i'm not too sure either. Still makes sense this way and jumps mightve been too dense idk
150.726s - For the life of me i cant hear this note. Does it go to the vocal? Cuz the ones right before it feel like they go to the tom.
176.765s - Feels off. I think the same thing happens a bit earlier in the file too.


The long 16ths sections are great but that shouldnt be a surprise since you've had lots of practice making jumpstream

Take my critique with a grain of salt though. I might just be talking out of my ass. File is still really fun and I like the song choice a lot as well.

Re: Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k

haha i appreciate reviews like this, i'll look over the sections after i finish this ~new~ file today. thanks wafles