A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

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  • Zaevod
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2013
    • 385
    #1

    A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

    Actually, more like breakcore + rock. Yeah, the genre is a bit messed up (I never think about genre when I'm making something).

    I think it's much better than the not-so-successful experiment that was Northwing Fury I.

    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/northwing-fury-ii

    Edit: tried to fix some mixing issues.
    Last edited by Zaevod; 07-19-2013, 06:05 PM.
    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse
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    • Fission
      no
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Jan 2004
      • 1850
      #2
      Re: A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

      the breakcore samples you are using sound..... really dull. they are missing bass and midrange that they could really use. the bass guitar sounds rather overpowering as well. finally, the guitar sounds muddier than it should be; it needs to cut through the other instruments more imo. from a compositional standpoint, it isn't too bad.
      Last edited by Fission; 07-19-2013, 05:54 PM.

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        • Zaevod
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2013
          • 385
          #3
          Re: A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

          I'll try to fix right away.
          https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse

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            • Choofers
              FFR Player
              FFR Music Producer
              • Dec 2008
              • 6205
              #4
              Re: A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

              I've used that exact same sample haha

              as far as your sequencing goes, you should definitely look into making stuff more cohesive, some sections sound very disjointed and hard to follow

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                • Zaevod
                  FFR Player
                  • Apr 2013
                  • 385
                  #5
                  Re: A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

                  Originally posted by Choofers
                  as far as your sequencing goes, you should definitely look into making stuff more cohesive, some sections sound very disjointed and hard to follow
                  I don't find any transitions particularly abrupt or anything, which parts are you talking about?
                  https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse

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                    • midnghtraver
                      Icarus Moth
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Jan 2006
                      • 2064
                      #6
                      Re: A Breakcore Experiment - Northwing Fury II

                      Originally posted by Zaevod
                      (I never think about genre when I'm making something)
                      That's a good practice unless you're making a commissioned piece.

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