These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

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  • CammyGoesRawr
    nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
    • Jul 2011
    • 2477
    #1

    These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

    Decided to steer away from making wubs on this one. steered wayyyy awayyyyy. Have a listen, all feedback is welcome c:

    https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to

    Also, when this is finished, permission is granted to use it under my band's name, An Era No More

    (Update 5/19/13) Here is an updated track, had to make some major panning changes.

    https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white

    (Update 5/22/13) Finished recording!! I don't want to type out a story for this update so here it is without further adieu.

    https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white-official
    Last edited by CammyGoesRawr; 05-22-2013, 04:23 PM.

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    • Charu
      Snivy! Dohoho!
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Mar 2006
      • 6161
      #2
      Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

      I can only hear the right ear? I don't know if that's just me though.


      Originally posted by JohnRedWolf87
      Charu the red-nosed Snivy
      Had a very shiny nose
      And if you ever saw it
      You could even say it glows

      All of the other Snivies
      Used to laugh and call him names
      They never let poor Charu
      Join in any Snivy games

      (Click the arrow to see the rest)


      Originally posted by Vendetta21
      All in all I would say that Charu not only won this game, his play made me reconsider how I play it.

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        • yo man im awesome
          soleil ardent
          FFR Simfile Author
          • May 2007
          • 6514
          #3
          Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

          Sounds like it's really good, but why is it panned like 100% to the left right speaker?

          EDIT: i think it'd be p. sick if you had it pan 100% to one side like this until around :28, then balance it out
          Last edited by yo man im awesome; 05-18-2013, 03:51 PM. Reason: i'm stupid

          Originally posted by choof
          you double dad loving dipshit
          Originally posted by t-rogdor
          dammit now i have to smoke a picture of choof out of a bong
          Originally posted by smartdude1212
          I can't be the only guy who has wondered what it'd be like to menstruate all over the shower.

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            • Coolboyrulez0
              VICES
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Music Producer
              • Aug 2006
              • 10042
              #4
              Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

              yeah exactly what yo man said. the instrumentation and composition is wicked just fix the actual mix. levels are fine too, if you can fix the panning issues I can master it for you to commercial levels. (w/o clipping ofc)

              yeah I'm pretty sure I'd step this once you create a stereo mixdown.
              https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
              https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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                • CammyGoesRawr
                  nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
                  • Jul 2011
                  • 2477
                  #5
                  Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                  I think I know why it might be panned to the right. Fixing now, I accidentally put in a fader track to see what it does, and i never took it out, Will make an update post once its fixed.

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                    • CammyGoesRawr
                      nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
                      • Jul 2011
                      • 2477
                      #6
                      Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                      Update post!!! Worked on the song a bit today and I can honestly say it turned out pretty well. Fixed the fader track so it's no longer panned 100% to the right.

                      (will update the OP with the new track)

                      https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white

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                        • Coolboyrulez0
                          VICES
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          FFR Music Producer
                          • Aug 2006
                          • 10042
                          #7
                          Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                          hi there, i did a master (loudness, saturation, reverb etc.) since i think this track had a lot of potential.
                          i think it brings out the best of the track but also shows some issues like the loud drum mixing (hard to fix with just master track; would need stems)
                          hope you like this version -- i for one love the track and think the master benefits it.

                          These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White (master)
                          http://www.mediafire.com/?ml5fidb4255uqp8
                          MediaFire is a simple to use free service that lets you put all your photos, documents, music, and video in a single place so you can access them anywhere and share them everywhere.


                          Feel free to use it if you like it, i dont really need credit i just do this for my enjoyment / practice!
                          https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
                          https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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                            • CammyGoesRawr
                              nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
                              • Jul 2011
                              • 2477
                              #8
                              Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                              Eric this is pretty damn good. Thanks for the feedback! Out of curiosity, do you have any versions of Pro Tools LE? If so, I can send you the folder with the project file, audio files, tracks, inserts, etc. so you can get a better master of it.

                              Just a suggestion :3

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                                • Coolboyrulez0
                                  VICES
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  FFR Music Producer
                                  • Aug 2006
                                  • 10042
                                  #9
                                  Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                                  No, I sadly don't, but if I do have some spare time just send me the audio files (stems) themselves -- and I'll be able to restructure, mix and master the track. Glad you enjoyed it haha.

                                  By stems I mean each individual track (guitar lead, drums, etc.) rendered as an individual .wav file.
                                  https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
                                  https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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                                    • CammyGoesRawr
                                      nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
                                      • Jul 2011
                                      • 2477
                                      #10
                                      Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                                      Will do later tonight

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                                        • CammyGoesRawr
                                          nocturnal girl (〜✘﹏✘)〜
                                          • Jul 2011
                                          • 2477
                                          #11
                                          Re: These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

                                          Double-post because I finally finished recording all parts, mixing, and fading at the end. Didn't think it would end up at 8:38 but every time i listen to this, i don't get bored a single time. so i present what i'll call a rough master of this track. Next stop is to render all the individual stems and have CBR do a more professional master on this.

                                          https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white-official

                                          (updating OP as well)

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